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Amber's CCA App, redone

Post  Zergling373 on Thu Jun 28, 2012 5:43 pm

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Steam name: Zergling373
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:24682134
Age: 18
How long have you been roleplaying?: Since I was like, eight. xD I used to play RP on Starcraft maps and such. It was epic fun.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me approaches the wounded civilian, and the three citizens watching over him.
/me says, "What's going on here?"
/it the wounded civilian says, "A man. He sho.. shot me.."
/it the wounded civilian coughs up a bit of blood.
/me says, "Which way did he go?"
/it the three civilians standing around him point toward the apartments.
/me says, "Here."
/me applies bandages to his wound.
/it the civilian sits up, and says weakfully, "Th-thank you.."
/me walks towards the apartments, and opens the doors.
/it A civilian is pointing a gun toward another civilian with his hands in the air.
/me approaches the man, and attempts to knock the gun out of his hand.
/me roll 67
/him roll 24
/me sends the gun flying across the room.
/me attempts to knock the man unconscious.
/me roll 79
/him roll 49
/me ties him up.
/me says to the other civilian, "Get out of here."
/it the Civilian runs away.
/me drags the unconscious civilian to jail.


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Amber was born in Canada, where she grew up. But soon after she was born, her younger cousin Krystal was born also. Krystal's parents were killed one day, due to natural cause of a random meteor striking their house while she happened to be crawling around outside. When Amber's parents found out, they adopted Krystal into the family, and Amber and Krystal quickly became close.

In school, Amber was only a grade higher than Krystal. They went to school every day, and were straight A students. But one day, Krystal had developed a couple bullies at school, who constantly teased her. Amber, being the older one, quickly became the stronger one also. She beat up the bullies, teaching anyone not to mess with her cousin again or they'll meet the same end. She became the brawn, while Krystal became the brains. Krystal's grades stayed up, while Amber's slowly fell from not caring as much and being more concerned with being known as the 'not to be messed with' type.

Amber and Krystal became victims of the 7 hour war, years after graduation. Their parents were killed, and they traveled through town, searching for any supplies. They remained together, using their skills to help one another with survival in the war. Amber would do the fighting, while Krystal would use her brains to hack into security systems for food shelters. But soon, Combine found them, and attempted to take them back to City 18. Amber fought off the guards to give Krystal a chance to escape. Krystal ran, and she never saw her since that. Amber was beaten horribly, and thrown into many re-education centers. After about a week of being beaten by combine, she was thrown into City 18 with no idea that Krystal once lived here, and was now long gone.

From previous incidents with the Combine, she has learned that they are heartless, and understands that they aren't afraid of killing civilians. She avoids breaking the law, and tends to help as much as she can.. trying to get on the 'good side' of the Combine. She does whatever she can to survive, whether it's stealing or fighting, but makes sure not to get caught by the Combine, in great fear that she may be severely beaten again.

---IC Information---
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Name: Amber LePointe
CID: #65624
Age: 28
Country of origin: Canada
Hair colour: Brunette
Eye colour: Hazel

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:

Her endurance is her highest stat, due to constant fighting and beatings. Followed by strength, due to always fighting. She knows how to fight very well, and is an outstanding leader. She doesn't much care for others, but will help out if asked upon.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:

No.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:

No.


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A quick critique

Post  Archimedes on Thu Jun 28, 2012 6:24 pm

Zergling373 wrote:
Steam name: Zergling373
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:24682134
Age: 18

You only have 19 lines of rp examples >.< (technically)
You should have split the rolls into...
/me rolls 30 out of 100
/it rolls 24 out of 100
This gives you the extra lines needed. But you should not be just aiming for 20 lines. Remember to treat the rp examples like they would show up in game. like the "20 out of 100."

Also anyone outside of the "Cities" when they were established weren't allowed to enter the "Cities" according HL2 Canon...
D-Lop wrote: One thing to remember is that CPs killed people under 18 and you can't get into a city if you were outside when thar invasion happened.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Zergling373 on Thu Jun 28, 2012 6:59 pm

Archimedes wrote:
Zergling373 wrote:
Steam name: Zergling373
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:24682134
Age: 18

You only have 19 lines of rp examples >.< (technically)
You should have split the rolls into...
/me rolls 30 out of 100
/it rolls 24 out of 100
This gives you the extra lines needed. But you should not be just aiming for 20 lines. Remember to treat the rp examples like they would show up in game. like the "20 out of 100."

Also anyone outside of the "Cities" when they were established weren't allowed to enter the "Cities" according HL2 Canon...
D-Lop wrote: One thing to remember is that CPs killed people under 18 and you can't get into a city if you were outside when thar invasion happened.

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There, hopefully that fixes it a bit. Thanks for the tip.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Thu Jun 28, 2012 7:17 pm

Archimedes leave the poor guy alone lol
Leave the review to the admins
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Archimedes on Thu Jun 28, 2012 7:34 pm

Just trying to help him avoid the 2 day wait. I did like his backstory though. I'm only trying to be constructive.
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CCA pplication: Toby Rourke

Post  Hans Krause on Sat Jun 30, 2012 6:30 pm

Steam name:dominic6602
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:32072284
Age: 16
How long have you been roleplaying?: 4 Years.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/it As they sit there a new recruit walks up.
MPF-RCT (me): Isolate!
Citizen 1:Okay.
/it Citizen 1 walks off.
Citizen 2 Yells: I am donw tih this CP reign
/it Runs t'word TunCEP
/me Chases him
Me (Radio): Citizen running to TunCEP, request assistance.
/it as the citizen runs an anti-citizen comes out with a gun
/me takes cover at terminal\
/radio Officer needs assistance, anti-citizen!
/it two High ranking CCAs arive, the two anti-citizens have fled into the slums
/it The City SeC walks up
SeC: Recruit, what happend
Me: I orderd two citizens to isolate, one yelled at me and fled. When he made it here an armed rebel gaurded his get away.
SeC: Very well, Get me an EAU, tell her to recon the slums.
SeC: Very good Recruit, thanks for reporting this.
Me; Sir, yes sir!
SeC: I want two men at TunCEP, lock it down.
me: yes sir!


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Toby's dad, Dave is a loyalist. His mom was killed when Rebels raided thier home for food and supply, His dad is too old for the CCA, so he is trying to get in the CWU, as for Toby, he is young and athletic, he is hoping to make it in the CCA, he knows his mom would be proud. The family now lives in C18 Dave, Toby and thier cousin John McCullin, who is a little punk. Toby and McCullin always fight. When Toby Rourke makes it in the CCA, who knows where this will end up? The dad know a bit about guns and fighting and taught his son all he could, the son has kept himself strong and fit through excersize and extra rations for being a loyalist.
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Application: Pallet

Post  TheSilverChocobo on Sun Jul 01, 2012 12:56 am

Steam name:Commander Dratini
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:52363151
Age: 17
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3 years
CCA.156-RGE says: "We've got a transfer, open the gate"
CCA.662-TYR walks over to the control console and opens the gate
Truck rolls in, carrying resistance members unknown to the guards and the nexus.
CCA.156-RGE says over radio: "Yeah, we got what looks like equipment from the outside. Check inside"
The Resistance jumps out, attacking everyone in the nexus.
CCA.156-RGE grabs his weapon, and runs through the gate, shooting down resistance members.
The onslaught is still going on, soldiers struggling to kill resistance.
CCA.156-RGE sees a the heavy weapons bunker, he runs over.
CCA.156-RGE says over radio: "Shit! close the bunker doors and try to get to the turrets! Watch out for guards!"
A melee unit runs into RGE, attempting to stab him with a knife.
CCA.156-RGE dodges and shoots him in the head with a pistol
CCA.156-RGE makes into the bunker and grabs an RPG
CCA.156-RGE runs out, and shoots the truck. Killing everyone inside.
CCA.156-RGE says: "I got it! I got the truck!"
CCA.156-RGE suddenly is stabbed from behind, he falls to the ground
A medic comes by and shoots the resistance member
He picks up RGE, carrying him to the infirmary
The Medic says: "Shit! we got a stab wound!"
CCA.156-RGE is bleeding everywhere
The medic lays him on the table, removing his mask and feeding him painkillers.
He suddenly bolts up, and screams in pain
The Medic says: "Get the hell down! you're making it worse!"
CCA.156-RGE wakes up, to many wounded.
CCA.15
/Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
Pallet Ontario. He was born poor, in a military family. His dad was was a resistance member. Killing every combine he could, he was a general. When one day, the combine attacked. They killed his father, and left him to die. Pallet had hated his father, he killed so many innocents. Pallet went on to live in the woods, becoming a natural born killer. He signed up for a Combine operation to attack resistance members, where he went on an onslaught, killing many. He has no records from his mother, nor brothers and sisters. Pallet has retired and hopes to join Civil Protection as a side job to help protect his city.


Name: Pallet Ontario
CID: 14170
Age: 24
Country of origin: Austrailia
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour: Brown.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Fast, good with a knife, good aim.
Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No I have not

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No I have not
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Re: CCA Application

Post  musketeer on Sun Jul 01, 2012 7:38 am

Chris10023 DENIED

RP examples were OK, but there weren't enough lines.
Backstory needs work. Be more descriptive and maybe spend some time on writing about key events.

Techy ACCEPTED

Your RP examples was good and descriptive.
Your backstory could do with a bit of work, same as Chris, it needs to go more in depth about key events to be relly good.

mrloco DENIED

Backstory has grammar mistakes, same with the RP example.
Not very creative or easy to understand what specifically happened.

Sully ACCEPTED

Good RP example, looc isn't needed, however.
Backstory was kind of descriptive, but tailed off at the end with the eye thing.
Overall, well written. I have seen you RPing on the server and I think you will do well.

ZeMelon DENIED

Obviously English isn't your first language, but your spelling was a bit off throughout. If it was just once or twice i'd make an exception. Next time, use a spell checker.

RP example and backstory was OK/good, but the spelling has to be fixed.

Zergling ACCEPTED

One spelling mistake in the RP example "Weakfully".
RP example was slightly difficult to follow.
Backstory was very good, you obviously spent time on it as it's much longer than the minimum of 6 lines.

Overall, a good application.

Hans Krause DENIED

RP examples were unrealistic and had basic spelling mistakes all the way through. (spell checker next time)
Recruits are not outside the nexus unless on field experience.
Your backstory was hard to follow and minimal in terms of detail.
All odf the application form MUST be filled out.

TheSilverChocobo DENIED

RP example had no mention of rolls and was all fightRP.
RGE....?
Your backstory was undescriptive and you can't have been born to a resistance father because you'd be under 10 years old...

ALL THOSE DENIED RE-APPLY IN 2 DAYS
THOSE THAT GOT ACCEPTED, welcome to the CCA.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  musketeer on Sun Jul 01, 2012 2:11 pm

CCA Applications are now closed due to high number of CCA units. This topic will be unlocked when the playerbase grows.
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Ob02's CCA application

Post  Ob02 on Mon Jul 02, 2012 10:56 pm

Steam name: Ob02
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:31603570
Age: 19
How long have you been roleplaying?: Roughly seven months.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me.
/it A scream is heard from the apartments.
/me rushes toward the apartments.
/me advances up the stairs cautiously, not making a sound.
/it another scream is heard.
/me hears the scream, and locates the source.
/me runs up to the second apartment on the fourth floor.
Me radios in: "<:: Screaming heard from the apartments, fourth floor, requesting backup."
SeC radios in: "<:: Copy."
/it Two units arrive at the fourth floor.
Me: "<:: Check."
/me checks his ammo.
*CCA1 checks his ammo.*
*CCA2 checks her ammunition.*
Me: "<:: Ready."
CCA1: "<:: Ready."
CCA2: "<:: I'm ready!"
Me: "<:: Three."
Me: "<:: Two."
Me: "<:: One."
Me: "<:: Inject!"
/me shoots the lock, swinging the door open.
/me checks the apartment, finding no-one.
Me: "<:: Cleaned!"


Character backstory
David Snider was born on December 22nd, in Scotland. and he was the second oldest of five children. He was obsessed with athletics, and he was a soccer star by the age of six. He had trouble avoiding picking on his older brother, Justin, and he was grounded frequently. In grade 5, he became a playground bully. Picking on people made him feel like the toughest kid on the playground, even if most of his time in this position was spent in the detention room.
David's bullying phase depleted once he got to college, and he managed to get medical education, learned Computer coding, and became the captain of the football team. He later joined the Military, but quit after two years.
David's parents were killed in a explosion during the Combine invasion. It was only until later he discovered his parents were killed by a human bomb, desperate to kill Combine troops in the area. David and Justin were enraged by this discovery. Justin joined the CWU in city 11, but David became harsher towards the human race than Justin.
David decided the best way to get back at the human race is to become a CCA, so when he arrived at C18, he went around asking were he could get a application.




---IC Information---
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Name: David Snider
CID: #43077
Age: 31
Country of origin: Scotland
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Medical Degree.
Military Level Training.
Computer coding

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole:
No.
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Discard My Application - Ob02

Post  Ob02 on Mon Jul 02, 2012 10:59 pm

CCA applications are closed, disgard the application.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Magnum21 on Mon Jul 02, 2012 11:33 pm

---OOC Information---
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Steam name:/\/\agnum
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:38823154
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 Years


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/Me Leaves the nexus with a SMG2 slung over shoulder
/Me Scans the area for uncivilized activity
/Me Sees two citizens in a fight
/Me approaches
/Me Yells "Get on the wall
/It A citizen throws a punch at me
/me rolls 50
/it rolls 39
/Me Dodges the punch and grabs the mans wrist and cracks it
/It The man Screams in pain as he sees his wrist snapped
/It The other man runs away towards the apartments
/Me radio's for backup
/Me Zipties the captured man and knocks him out with my stunstick
/Me Drags the unconsious man to the nexus and into a cell for further punishment
/Me reports to highest ranking CP on duty
/Me is ordered to interrogate and re-educate captured man
/Me walks to the cell i left the man in and orders him to the interrogation room,being watched by a higher rank 01
/Me asks whet the arguement was about
/It The citizen responds with "We were told about a stash of guns hidden in the slums and we were argueing who has to get them
/Me Asks 01 "re-educate"?
/it 01 orders me to leave the man in the room
/Me leaves



Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Henry was a geek,A geek that noone ever cared about much,Born in scotland,His mother died giving birth to henry and henry's dad died in a explosion when he was only 3.Henry grew up working with computers,building them,fixing them and refurbishing them to name a few.Henry's Other hobby was guns,often going to a shooting range sunday evening and firing some clips while having a beer to two.Being a geek,when the seven hour war started,he didnt fight the combine,He supported them,He KNEW they had the advantage,He KNEW they would win,He KNEW they would rule the world,And so He Applied for Civil protection when he had the chance.

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Name:Henry Epsilon
CID:98722
Age:21
Country of origin:Scotland
Hair colour:Jet Black
Eye colour:Dark blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Computer technitian,going to a shooting range with a p228 as a hobby

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
None

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
None

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Kaile Gale Vaile's Application for MPF -Quadruple fix XD-

Post  Febidoman on Sat Jul 07, 2012 11:28 pm

Steam name:Koty
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:18485879
Age:13
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 months ½ on different servers.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):
/me Patrols around corner.
/me Looks around the area checking for disturbance.
/it The air is silent and a few citizens walk past.
/me Spots a particular citizen.
/it He walks toward me.
Citizen Says: Hey you combine Bitch.
I say: What did you say?
Citizen Says: You heard me.
/me Flicks on stunstick, Firmly holding the grip, turning it to high voltage.
I say: Get on the wall.
Citizen Says: Why?
I say: Get... On the wall.
Citizen Says: Fine you combine Bitch
I Say: Apply
Citizen Says: I'm not telling you crap.
I Say: I said, Apply!
Citizen Says: I did absolutely nothing.. I will kill you asshole!!
I say: Hmm. Unfit for the civil community
/me Attempts to knock out Citizen with Stunstick.
/I roll 51 out of 100.
/Citizen Rolls 49 out of 100.
/me Knocks out citizen and Ties him up.
/me Walks to nexus and tosses citizen in cell for 2 cycles of detainment.
/me locks Combine lock and walks off to patrol more.

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should
reflect your skills):(Child years)
Mom? Mom, where are you? *He walked down the stairs...
and his mother was killed by his maniac father. He moved to America shortly after.
(Nothing left to tell here)
(Teenage years)
*At his house, he was adopted by a god awfully mean person who's name is Lionel Bartigastry*
Uh... When can I eat? *Lionel*: Shut up! I won't feed you! *Lionel punches Kaile in the face* Agh!!! I'm gonna run away you mindless asshole! *Lionel*: Don't talk to me like that! *Kaile runs like the wind out the door, mindlessly cussing Lionel out.*
I'll cut your throat, old little fucker! *A few hours later* *He gasps after running too long..* I'll fuck you up some day old man..
*He gets some money from a few strangers, willing to help him out. He buys a burger
from McDonald's* *Once again, nothing left to tell here*

(Adulthood)

*He's watching TV when all the lights go out. The TV still works.*
My god... It's a bloodbath between these... guys with gas masks and the US army...
*He runs to look outside* Even more gas masked men are out here... patrolling the streets? God I'm confused.. CP: Get inside! The war is in progress!
*7 hours later, Kaile is transfered to a place called... City 18* Hmm... these Civil Protection aren't half bad....

(Life as a Citizen)

CP: Citizen. Wall......... Apply!
*The citizen says his name and CID*
Prepare to receive civil judgement!

Me: Wow.... these guys are awesome...
I think I'll apply later, but it's curfew!
*He walks to his apartment, then goes to bed*
*He wakes up, and runs to a Civil Protection unit*

Sir, can I apply for Civil Protection? CP: Hmm... They are open right now.. Come on!
*We walk into the nexus, and he gives me some Breen's water slowly forget about what the nexus looked like. The CP asks me a series of questions and gives me a paper with a format. He fills it out and gives it to him... and waits for approval or denial.



---IC Information---
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Name:Kaile Gale Vaile
CID:63344
Age:26
Country of origin: USA
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: He is very good with knowledge of technology, He is increasingly strong, And very athletic.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  ronin2000 on Sun Jul 08, 2012 10:07 pm

Guys the Apps are closed, they are Closed!
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I know the applications are closed, but can you just take a look at mine for now? I'm keeping it here for safe-keeping.

Post  Microneko on Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:08 am

---OOC Information---
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Steam name: {+Porchpiggie+} Microneko
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:8407777
Age: 17. I would like to note that I am, indeed, a seahorse.
How long have you been roleplaying?: It's been a great five years. In serious roleplay in general, about 6 months total.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

NOTE: I would like to note that my character is the MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 to case an example of what a Civil Protection unit does to complete his standard directives. Here, this is a color coding for the /me's, /it's, and /event text. Event text is ORANGE. /it text is CYAN. /me is GREEN.

** The night has an eerie silence to it. It's comforting, yet terrifying in the process.

** A single unit walks down the dirty pavement; a mess an enslaved Biotic should have cleaned.

** "<:: Copy that. Going to patrol in District One; Cycle One out of Three." The unit states into his handheld radio before clipping it back onto his Duty Belt.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989's footsteps on the pavement echo throughout the eerie silence, he begins to shudder at how silent District One is.

** Is the Resistance planning another raid against the Metropolice Force, The unit thinks. He chuckles at the thought.

** Footsteps other than his own are heard, as it echoes in unison with his very own.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 slowly begins to draw his 9x19 USP Match out of its protective leather holster, he perks up at the sudden sound.

** The footsteps are gentle, but can be heard loudly in the silence.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 stays on his alert, advancing to the location of the sound.

** The sound comes from a dark alleyway.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 turns the corner, expecting the worse.

** The sound was coming from a stray dog, who was whimpering, The dog looks up with dismay and sorrow in his eyes.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 chuckles at his own paranoia.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 crouches and pets the stray to give it some comfort before heading off to complete the rest of his standard directives.

** Four hours pass as the unit ripcords to the Nexus to update his daily logs.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 holds down the two side notches on his facemask and removes it.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 inhales deeply, getting some fresh air.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 begins to undress and put on his cotton night gown.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 updates his personal logs, and chuckles as he writes down his earlier experience with paranoia and a stray.

** MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989 lays down, getting the rest he surely deserved.

Character back-story (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Jordan Bourne looked up at the poster that had the words, "Help your City to drive out the malignant! Join the Universal Union, today!". He held a paper with several paragraphs of handwriting on it, the title labeled, "Combine Civil Authority Application". He walked into the Recruitment Office, a bright and contagious smile plastered his face as he walked towards the accountant and placed the paper on the counter.

Jordan always wanted to be a police officer when he was a young boy, but never was able to be accepted for reasons unknown. In his heart, he knows he can support and help the Universal Union in many ways- he wishes to be its grindstone, sharpening it's blade.

That's only one reason. The other is; He wants vengeance. He has had a rough childhood, living in poverty with a single mother. His father died in Afghanistan. He had to work two jobs as a teenager to support him and his mother; to put food on the table. His mother had to work as a prostitute, and worked late at night. His mother later died from an STD later in her prostitute career.

He wants to beat citizens who have never felt REAL pain in there life, show them what real pain is. He lived in harsh conditions, and is glad everybody feels his pain now. He wishes to be on top, ordering the citizens and let him shiver at his presence.

Before his father died and was enlisted into the Army, he was taught basic mechanics and first-aid. He was also taught to shoot a sidearm, but hasn't fully embraced the recoil of certain weapons- but has average accuracy.
---IC Information---


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COMBINE CIVIL AUTHORITY APPLICATION

Name: Jordan Bourne
CID: 22956
Age: 23
Country of origin: United States of America
Hair colour: Midnight Shade
Eye colour: Amber

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?:
I was taught basic medical and simple mechanics, and I can handle a sidearm fairly well.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
If you're referring to Anti-Citizen actions or have committed any acts of decreasing the sociostability, then no.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No.


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Re: CCA Application

Post  Archimedes on Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:53 am

Microneko wrote:
NOTE: I would like to note that my character is the MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989
Microneko wrote:
my character is the MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989
Microneko wrote:
is the MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989
Microneko wrote:
MPF-C8-04.CORE.60989

You should spend more time on the server before you make an app, because if you did you would realise that our CCA naming system is completely different then the one you described.
1. we use CCA not mpf
2. we do not use the city "c8" in our code
3. the rank goes after the division

A proper name for the character you gave would be CCA-CORE.04.60989

Now your probably like, "its just a name its no big deal," but it is. It shows that you don't fully understand how our server is run. There are a lot of differences between SoTA and other HL2 RP servers. One is that APEX isn't a division its a rank. But what is APEX higher then and what is APEX lower then? And there plenty more subtle differences besides that that makes the server very different.

It's funny because I was in the same position when I applied, I used APEX as a division when we didn't have one and I was called out for it, so I am calling you out. Its no offense or anything, just trying to help.

EDIT:Oh and according to when you joined the server you are new, actually only had an account for one day, so yea. Very Happy
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Re: CCA Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Mon Jul 16, 2012 2:03 pm

But you forget the most important part...
APPS ARE CLOSED!
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Microneko on Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:59 pm

You should spend more time on the server before you make an app, because if you did you would realize that our CCA naming system is completely different then the one you described.
1. we use CCA not MPF
2. we do not use the city "c8" in our code
3. the rank goes after the division

Sorry for applying so early, I know I've been on the server one day, but I have a habit of doing "early applications", in which I create an application within a small time span of first joining the server. I understand that's quite annoying once you think about it, but it's a hard habit to get rid of.

Also like to note that I put that down ICly and OOCly, as for one, my character ICly does not know the ranks correctly, or the divisions and their role in protecting the inhabitants of City Eight.

Thanks for the constructive criticism. About the CCA/MPF thing, sorry about that. I'm a super admin on my own clan's server, and we use that most of the time, along with a few other servers I admin on. You just get used to it, you know? I'm the Sectorial Commander and sometimes I associate other server rules and regulations with others, my apologies. It's just instinct to associate the regulations on my server with others, but again, sorry.

And yes, to Diablo, I know the applications are CLOSED. I just wanted to put it there for safe keeping, so I understand that it gets denied because of that sole reason. Sorry to be a nuisance.
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Permission to edit

Post  Microneko on Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:08 pm

Do I have the permission to edit that small infraction?

Let's say, if the applications were open, would it be denied for a small infraction such as that? If I become a Combine Civil Authority unit, then I can fully understand the divisions and their roles in protecting the inhabitants of City Eight. I think, as a self opinion, I did fairly well with the roleplay example and the back story, as they are both fully original, other than the generic, "da rebels kild mai family and i wnt to protct evrybudy!11" back story.

I'm not going to point fingers, but I've seen worse applications on this thread that has still been accepted, none-the-less.

And yes, I am not going to deny the inevitable, my application getting denied to the application cycle being closed. I just wanted to post it on this thread to get some constructive criticism before the 'real thing'.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:06 pm

ITs denied already. You posted after the apps were closed. You have to post when the apps open up.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Microneko on Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:39 pm

ITs denied already.

/me facepalm

I KNOW this. I knew it was going to be denied the second I posted it because the applications are CLOSED.

I'm not oblivious to that, I know they're closed. But, I really could care LESS.

I posted it here for constructive critisism so when applications ARE open, then I can use said constructive critisism to improve my already denied application to guarantee an accpetion. I believe you're missing the point I'm trying to get to. Do you understand now..?


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Re: CCA Application

Post  mahunik on Wed Jul 25, 2012 4:39 pm

Open up dem apps
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ZE APPLICATIONS!

Post  D-Lop on Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:37 pm

Applciations are open, and I'll be accepting/denying them.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Brandondice3 on Fri Jul 27, 2012 1:36 am

I dont know how to delete a post.


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Karl's CCA app

Post  mrloco100 on Fri Jul 27, 2012 6:02 pm

Steam name: mrloco87
Steam ID: steam_0 : 0 :49381279
Age:13 and a half
How long have you been roleplaying?:about 11 months of serious roleplay on different servers.


20 lines of roleplay example:

/me Reaches arm to catch a high up object.
/me Knocks over object noticing it is just a small can.
/me Goes outside to put empty can in the trashcan.
/it The clouds start to become grey and rain starts falling on my jumpsuit.
/me Runs back into my apartment.
/me Enters the room slumped over looking exausted.
/me Sits down to catch breath.
/me Gets up and checks window .
/me Sighs after i notice the rain is still pouring.
/me Wears talking downstairs.
/me Walks down the stairwell to investigate.
/me Sees two men yelling at eachother.
/me Asks why they are yelling at eachother.
/it One of the men gives a depressing stare and I leave without saying anything else.
/it Alarms sound and everyone is startled by the combine rushing into the building.
/me Presses against the wall ready for inspection.
/it The officer pats me down and announces that i am cleaned.
/it The group of citizens walk back into their apartments relieved that the inspection is over.
/me Walks outside to the benches and sits down on an empety seat.
/me Waves to my friend while he passes by the benches.

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills)
: I was born in the city of New York with my parents and two brothers. We were a nice middle class family.I did well in school but never went to college. I spent my adult life working at a convenience store in New York. Hoping a better job, I was living alone in a small studio apartment. when I heard about the 7 hour war I headed to the nearest evacuation zone where the military would pick up people. I spent an entire day at a military camp until the combine relocated us to city 45. I spent a few months there but I left to city 18 because I thought it would be better there. when I got there I was suprised at the wreckage from the war. I started to walk around then I went to buy an apartment and I have been living here ever since.

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Name:Karl Stevens.
CID: 89184
Age:28
Country of origin:America
Hair colour:black.
Eye colour:blue.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I am a very fast runner, i know a little bit above average about computers


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: I was a metro police on another server


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: one: an audio violation for cussing.
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