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G-Mans (re)CCA app

Post  [SoTA]G-Man on Thu May 24, 2012 3:36 am

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Steam name:G-Man(=GW=)
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:31437618
Age:13
How long have you been roleplaying?:7 1/2 months



20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Stares at citizen suspiciously
/it spots citizen running into slums
/me does a leap of faith
/me Prepares speech
/it Attempts to help sick citizen
/me coughs up blood
/me tosses papers in the garbage
/it spots vortigaunt being disrespectful
/me Attempts to untie shirt
/me attempts to toss a soda can at a friend
/it Looks at citizen having a temper-tantrum
/me attempts to shoot at undead specimen
/me Shed's Two tears
/it spots A unknown citizen
/me Attempts to grab wrist and twist for pain on citizen
/it looks at the ground for a soda can
/me attempts to knock out citizen
/me Tumbles on staircase
/me Attempts to help up knocked down citizen
/me takes 3 deep breath's


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): " Phil Baker was born on october 1985 and grew up In a farm home with his two brothers Nick & Dack. He was A middle Nick was the oldest and Dack was the youngest. Since he was 6 years old he always wanted to help the metro police force out in the early rebel war while he was being constantly picked on by his older brother Nick. When he was 14 years old he started practice shooting the 9mm pistol made out of metal with some rust. when he was 22 and out of his school he got transferred to city 10 for research on the vortigaunt species and Came a cross Wallace Breen And thought to himself that Wallace Breen is the Combine leader then when He found out about the combine leader he Was booked to arrive at city18 which He will now be looking for work and tranquility."

---IC Information---
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Name:Phil Baker
CID:#13947
Age:25
Country of origin:United States(America)
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:He is good with mechanical setup and programming and always been a great shot with the 9mm pistol.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:Not at all.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:Nope not at all





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Re: CCA Application

Post  DeadCherry on Thu May 24, 2012 2:10 pm

I will leave D-Lop to judge this application.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  [SoTA]G-Man on Thu May 24, 2012 2:11 pm

ummm. k
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Zachary Kazov CCA Application

Post  Carrotkidful on Thu May 24, 2012 3:04 pm

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Steam name:Carrotkidful
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:50721550
Age:13
How long have you been roleplaying?: 1 ¾ years


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me.
/me Looks at the CWU worker
/it He is eating rations
/me ‘s Stomach rumbles
/me Walks back to his apartment sighing heavily
/me Flops down on the couch
/it The broadcast for rations goes off
/me Gets up briskly
/me Rushes to the Nexus entrance
/me Reaches the Nexus entrance and goes to the back of the line
/it The person in front is taking a long time
/me Reaches the front of the line after a long wait
CCA Officer says “Citizen, apply”
Citizen says “Adam Jenkins 25936”
**CCA Officer checks his datapad
CCA Officer says “alright, you can go”
/me Goes to the ration machine and activates it
/it The machine takes a long time and there is an awkward silence
/it The machine finally spits out a ration
/me Takes the ration gratefully
/me Hurries back to the apartment to open his rations

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc. and should reflect your skills):
Zachary Kazov was very pretty from a young age, she was very popular and had lots of friends, when she was growing up and turned eight a gang of three hoodlum teenagers broke into her apartment. She was very scared and hid in the cupboard in the kitchen, her father grabbed a knife and tried to fight back buying her mother time to ring the police, two of them killed her father in front of her, the other one then knocked her mother to the floor and raped her, while the two who had killed her father raided the house. By the time the police got there nothing was left but two bodies and a crying child.
After that in school she would never let anyone hurt anyone else or take anything of anyone else’s. she was no longer afraid of blood or pain and was happy to fight anyone who did anything she disliked or tried to stop her, but one day she took it too far, a two years older girl stole some money of a girl two years below Zachary Kazov and she lost it, she beat the crap out of the girl in a flurry of fists and rage. But the girl never forgot that. 2 months later the older girl saw Zachary Kazov who was now 11 outside of school going down an alley shortcut. She followed her into the darkest part and grabbed her, the girl then proceeded to stab her repeatedly four times in the chest.
Zachary Kazov was in hospital for 6 months fighting for her life with no family to care for her, the doctors and nurses were nice but it wasn’t the same as family. The older girl was in prison still and Zachary Kazov finally got out of the hospital, she was now twelve and went to school until the time to choose work experience or college, remembering the times she had helped people she decided to have work experience in the police force, she trained hard and was tough. She graduated from the academy with flying colours and became an official member of the police force. She wasn’t afraid of blood or getting hurt so she was given a lot of hard work from her superiors, she always followed orders to precision instantly and did well in the force.
Two weeks before the invasion she was with two other officers tasked with tackling a murder group of three. When they encountered them in a warehouse they were taken by surprise her good friend Dave was killed instantly by a gunshot to the neck and in the same second her partner Jake ended up in knife versus baton combat with one of the other members of the gang, they were both wearing masks. Before wondering where the final member of the gang was she took out her pistol and shot Dave’s killer three times in the chest. Then the final member came out from behind a cargo container and knocked the gun from her hand.
He then punched her in the stomach which winded her causing her to back up catching her breath. During this time the person who had winded her realised she was female. He knocked her to the ground and jumped on top of her, in the action of doing this his mask flew from his face, after a few minutes she managed to push his body from her, she recognised him as the person who had raped and butchered her mother before her. She mustered up all her strength hatred and anger and punched him in the face, the blow knocked him out cold but the damage was done, she knew that she would never be the same again she had been defiled by a murderer, and the murderer of her mother no less. She therefore grabbed his knife and slashed at his throat but he grabbed her hand with his and stopped the knife, she heard a loud thud from behind the container where Jake had been fighting, but didn’t have time to look over because the man jumped back on top of her and continued to slash at her clothes and nicked her skin in the process, she felt she was going to pass out but then the man stabbed her in the right of the chest near the shoulder, the pain was terrible and her head lolled back, before she fell into unconsciousness she saw Jake running towards her before flinging the gang members knife at her, but then she realised it had gone over her and had been aimed at the thug, she heard a large thud, saw Jake lean over her and passed out.
She came around a few times during the two weeks, but saw nothing but doctors and nurses rushing around, and Jake, she saw a lot of Jake, even the chief of police once. One time she came around long enough and came around enough to overhear Jake reporting what had happened to the chief, she overheard that Dave’s ashes were given to his family and he was given a police funeral, and that she had been raped by a sociopathic rapist that had been on the loose for years, before falling back into a deep coma.
When she finally woke up properly she was in some kind of holding pod on an overhead track that consisted of a baseplate for her body, three large thick strips of metal that held her in place and a large mechanism top to connect it to the rail, when she was let off she was greeted coldly by a soldier in a white uniform with a single red eye on it, after being ordered to tell it her name she was taken into a room by a person in a uniform that reminded her of a police uniform and a white gas mask, he explained to her that a race called the combine had taken over the planet and were now the rulers and were represented by a man named Dr Wallace Breen, she was then handed a set of blue clothes and a suitcase and told to go get changed into them. After doing so she was directed to a train station platform and pointed to a train that was about to depart, she didn’t care where she was going but she knew life really wouldn’t be the same, she could hear chatter in the background as she daydreamed of her childhood before it all went wrong, when she had her parents and lots of friends, but this was ended when the man sat beside her let out a crazy laugh which made her jump, he then proceeded to ramble on to the person on his other side about hell, ever since Zachary Kazov arrived she has wanted to join the CCA which she was told is like a police force, she wants to be a person of authority again and in a place of power to help people. But she was different now, she wouldn’t help anyone who opposes her, so she decided if she did manage to join she would only help the “Loyalists” a group who agree with the combine, and she would enforce the rules the combine have set out.

---IC Information---
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Name:Zachary Kazov
CID:98742
Age:30
Country of origin:England
Hair colour:Blonde
Eye colour:Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?: Able to handle a small side arm, Can throw a punch when necessary, a small amount of medical knowledge, knows how to work with technology quite well.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
I have reported an armed citizen mugging another citizen to a CCA Officer before

Have you had any previous infractions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No, not at all


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Re: CCA Application

Post  DeadCherry on Thu May 24, 2012 3:34 pm

Carrotkidful

Approved

Once again, your application's RP examples were a tad short. Your Backstory did go into a lot of detail in length and emotion making it quite enjoyable. Remember that as a CCA a lot more dialouge will be expected of your CCA when giving reports to your city's sector. You have passed the application and will be whitelisted the next time joining the server where a Super admin will whitelist you and you will be trained IC'ly be a OfC and up in the basics of the Combine Civil Authority. Be sure to read up on the forum section of the CCA handbook to understand basic rules and laws and terminoligy.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  D-Lop on Thu May 24, 2012 8:19 pm

G-Man( =GW= )


The 20 roleplay examples are supposed to make a story, not just random roleplay from any given moment. The backstory was fine, except CPs would've kileld him if he was 6, and even if he was older, they would've moved him to a city if they found out he wasn't in one already.

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Re-post in two days if you want another try
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Aerunaur on Thu May 24, 2012 8:35 pm

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Steam name: Aerunaur
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:5152241
Age: 13
How long have you been roleplaying?: A couple years, off and on. Last time I roleplayed was about three months back. I was busy with irl stuff.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me walks up to the wall and smashes his head in frustration.
James Udas: Hey, dude, calm down... we can handle this!
Me (Joshua Hamilton): God damn it man, we're screwed! There was a double agent. We've only got an hour, tops. We're as good as dead.
James: Man, we're even more dead if we don't try. We've got to put up a fight. Either that or try to escape. Is there any place you know of?
Me: No... we've got to make a last stand. Fend 'em off until we can get backup, and get the hell out of this city. To the Outlands, maybe... let's find a good spot. Up high.
/me turns around, and runs as fast as he can up the tallest building nearby.
James: Wait up, Josh! We've got to get supplies.
Me: You get the supplies, I'll scout for a good place. I'll also let you know through the radio if we got trouble. You've gotta hurry...
/it You can see searchlights flashing around...
/radio James, you've got to get as much ammo as you can up here, ASAP. Oh, and the heaviest weapon you can find.
James radios in: Got it.
/me searches around, sets up a place to make his final stand. You can hear radio chatter in the distance.
James radios in: I got everything in the bags.
/radio Then get the hell up here, before they get up here! They'll arrive and blast down the door any minute!
/it You can hear footsteps clattering up the stairs below. Radio chatter gets closer and closer.
**James prepares everything, and lays the makeshift ammo resupply station down in the most strategic position he can think of.
/it You can hear the door blast down. Radio chatter is swarming over.
Me: You ready, man?
James: Yeah. Let's do this.
/it The police finally come, in a deafening crash...

Yep, a cliff hanger. This gives you a good idea of my skills. I also don't want to write double the amount of lines I have to. This also shows I can actually do some passive RP :3



Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Reese Oliver is a 34-year-old refugee. He's been moving around since his 20's, since the first invasion by the Benefactors. He has made a living by being on the good side of police officers; they will often give him a little something for helping them out. And, of course, waiting for rations. There isn't much else for him, he never went to college. He doesn't have a real education, though he did serve in the military shortly before the invasion.

---IC Information---
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Name: Reese Oliver
CID: 62172
Age: 34
Country of origin: Chicago, USA
Hair colour: Dark Brown/Black
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?: I never did go to college. I did serve in the military shortly before the first... invasion, so I know which way to point a gun and all that. Nothing, really, aside from that. Sorry.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No, not of the city. The UU... I've kept my distance from them. I decided to apply today because I feel as if this city needs to be kept orderly. In fact, just today, I saw a ransom note saying that there were hostages in the slums. Hah, hard to believe, but even harder to believe that there is someone stupid enough to create that sort of note.


Have you had any previous infractions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No, I've stayed wise. I haven't done anything to give them reason to punish me. In fact, I'm on good terms with some officers.
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Am i in or what its never been checked

Post  Spade on Thu May 24, 2012 9:10 pm

|Dд|Spade wrote:
Snake4199 wrote:
---OOC Information---
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Steam name:|Dд| Spade
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:23876595
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?:7 1/2 months


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me Pick's up can

/me Pull's out shotgun

/me Picks up USP

/me Attempts to run away

/me Aims USP at citizen's head

/me Throws can into the garbage

/me Give's chase ration

/me Puts jacket on

/me Look's at dead body

/me Fall's over

/it The CCA chases the Rebel

/it The Rebel shoots the CCA

/it The citizen escapes

/it The citizen falls over

/it The citizen drinks the water

/it The citizen sit's down

/it The citizen turn's on the computer

/it The CCA shoot's the rebel's leg

/it The CCA turn's off the Slums gate

/it The Skyship hovers over the city


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Robert Moore grew up in city 14 with a small family 2 parents and 1 brother.Robert's dad died from a heart attack,And Robert's mom died from blood loss,Robert's brother died in an zombie infection back in city 14 at the age of 17,Robert's brother David last word's were "Live Strong Brother" To this day he thanks his brother because of helping him.So he started working to get coins and became loyal to the Civil Protection and moved to city 18.Robert knows how to succeed in life and he want's to succeed for his brother.Now Robert is going to make his brother and parents proud of him.

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Name:Robert Moore
CID:40233
Age:24
Country of origin:United States
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:My character is great with the knowlege of technology he knows and study's about computers and eletronic's,He is strong,Fast and a Great learner.And how to work with computer's he can fix Bug's and much more.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:No i have not had any expiriance with CCA or UU


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:No i have not had any infactions with the CCA or the UU



All applications MUST be posted in this thread. Any that are not will be DENIED.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  D-Lop on Thu May 24, 2012 9:20 pm

Aerunaur



The RP examples were great, the backstory was meh. If you served in the military the CPs killed you. The backstory wasn't really detailed, but it barely passed, also if this is an actualy character they would be loyalist level from helping CPs out. This app is...


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Fix the military part, or atleast don't tell the CPs, and re-post in two days and you should be good to go.

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Re: CCA Application

Post  Spade on Thu May 24, 2012 11:24 pm

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Steam name:|Dд| Spade
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:23876595
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?:7 1/2 months


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/it Watches citizen run through nexus

CCA:Hold it citizen

/me Pushes citizen back

CCA:Isolate

Citizen:Im supposed give this SMG i found

/me pulls SMG out of citizen's hand

/me Throws SMG in the nexus

CCA:Isolate

Citizen:No

/me Pulls out stun stick

/me Flicks trigger on

/it Walks towards citizen

/me Attempts to hit citizen

/Roll CCA "86"

/Roll Citizen "52"

/me Beat's citizen

Citizen:Please!...stop

/me Picks citizen up

CCA:Face the wall

CCA:Resist

Citizen: /me Does not resist

/me Ties citizen

/me Walk's citizen to nexus jail

/me Throws citizen in jail cell

CCA:Apply

Citizen:John Smith,51329

/me Checks CCA Data pad

CCA:Have fun

/me Locks door

Citizen:Your a sick bastard

/me Unlock's door

/me Pull's citizen out

CCA:Your going to the chair

/it Wathces citizen get killed





Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Joshua Moore grew up in city 14 with a small family 1 brother and his parents.Joshua was an engineer and worked on car's to get coins.After Joshua had enough coins he moved to city 18 shortly after his father's death.Everything was normal,Then two month's later the combine heard of Joshua and made him work on there broken APC.After Joshua fixed the APC he was granted 20 coins.Joshua often stayed in his apartmant that he bought.Later that day Joshua notice there was a breach outside when the Civil Protection knocked Joshua's door down he had no idea what was happening.Then the Civil Protection asked "Did you see a rebel walking around".Joshua's response was yes on the 4th floor.The Civil Protection said "of course he would be on the 4th floor,Later that day they found the rebel and put him in detainment.Joshua was granted another 20 coins and knew he was off to a good start.
---IC Information---
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Name:Joshua Moore
CID:30522
Age:24
Country of origin:United States Of America
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:Joshua Moore is great with the knowlege of technology he knows and study's about computers and eletronic's,He is strong,Fast and a Great learner.And how to work with computer's he can fix Bug's and much more.Joshua is also good with cars as an engineer.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:No i have not had any expiriance with CCA or UU


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:No i have not had any infactions with the CCA or the UU


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Re: CCA Application

Post  pimp5427 on Fri May 25, 2012 5:31 am

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Age: I do not feel comfortable answering this question.
How long have you been roleplaying?: The latter half of ten years.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

( It's will be in *s. Me's will be in "She/Her/Cynthia/etc." )

*A slight breeze passes through the city streets, the wind'a'whistling.*
Cynthia slowly strolled down the street, her sub-machinegun tucked neatly against her side, her hand lightly touching the handle as her finger hovered over the trigger.
*Almost echoing her neat, synced footsteps, the wind whistled along, covering any noises that bounced along the air at this time of night.*
She sighed, wiggling as she adjusted the stock on her side, looking around and almost hopping in startlement as a baggy-clothed man ran towards her with a handgun in one hand, and a long knife in the other.
*The man sprinted forward, waving the knife skillfully in his hand before lurching at Cynthia, screeching the blade down against her mask leaving a long scar stretching the mask, covering the eye.*
She yelped, hopping backwards and raising her gun, flicking the safety off and pulling the small hammer back, a bullet loaded into the chamber.
*After realizing his attack was useless against her steel mask, he raised his handgun, flicking the safety off and pulling the slide back.*
She unloaded her clip into him, even as he jutted backwards and fell to the ground with loud moans and groans of agony and pain.
*The wind seemed to die down, as Cynthia walked over to the man and kicked at his chest with her boot, and then turned, strutting away victoriously.*

( I know it isn't twenty, but they're very descriptive. If you would like me to redo it, please just ask. )


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Cynthia grew up an energetic, happy child, before something inside of her snapped, and she grew a shell. She became shy, timid, and always scared. When she began to grow, she grew into her clothing, and met the match of a beautiful young woman. Still shy and afraid to approach the world, Cynthia covered herself up as best as possible, keeping away from shady situations or people. She cowered at the sight of fighting, and fainted at the sight of blood. Eventually, she began to crawl out of her shell, and became a bit more happy, but still kept to herself. She found a tinkershop, run by a young German man, which she became good friends with. The man helped her and guided her in the way of mechanical devices, and she was his best worker, and best friends. One night, he disappeared, never to be seen again, and she ran the store for another two weeks before being relocated to City 18.

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Name: Cynthia Rose Henderson
CID: 5427
Age: 22
Country of origin: United States of America
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Interest in technology such as guns, mechanics, and/or suits.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
Once, for not replying to an officer.

I understand you shouldn't be quoting applications, but I saw you skipped past my application. Here it is.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Tenacious Dee on Fri May 25, 2012 9:05 pm

Im sorry, i cant join right now, my cousin's here, havent seen him in years. snake told me i was getting demoted if i didnt join today. I Really cant, since im playing terraria with my cousin.

Apologizes. Tenacious Dee (Deeydra)
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Re: CCA Application

Post  OneCoolGeezer on Sat May 26, 2012 11:34 pm

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Steam name: OneCoolGeezer
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:7292213
Age:12
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 years


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Looks around the room, focusing on a blood stain.
/it The blood stain seems to be fresh, also having a "butterfly" pattern.
/me walks closer to the stain.
/it A loud gunshot is heard outside.
/me whips around and looks out the window.
/it Outside the window, an infestation has begun of biotics.
/me quickly unholsters his MP7, loading a clip and clicking the safety off.
/me breaks the window with his foot and fires at the crowd of infected citizens.
/it The citizens begin falling, but more rise and slowly advance to the room.
/me quickly lobs a grenade, reloading his MP7.
/it The grenade drops in the middle of the crowd, then it explodes, sending bodies everywhere.
/me is hit by a flying body and is sent across the room into a wall.
/me hits the wall and slumps down.
/it The crowd of zombies seems to have vanished, bodies littering the ground outside.
/me gets up, dusting off his armor.
/it A loud siren is heard, as Civil Protection flood the area outside and dispose of the bodies.
/it After a few days, the plaza is cleaned and citizens roam around in it.
/me looks around, seeing a citizen with a gun.
/it A gunshot is heard, and a citizen falls down.
/me runs toward the man with the gun, unholstering and clicking off the safety of his MP7.
/it The man turns around and attempts to shoot the officer.
/it The man rolls 45
/it The officer rolls 42
/me is hit in the chest by a gunshot, but quickly attempts to fire at the man.
/it The officer rolls 64
/it The man rolls 23
/it The man is shot in the chest,leg,and neck.
/it The man's dead body falls to the floor and a blood pool forms.
/me clicks the safety on his MP7 and holsters it.
/me walks over to the dead body and drags it to the nexus, where it is destroyed.
/it A couple of other CCA members take care of the other citizen who was shot.
/me continues patrolling, walking around the plaza.

Character backstory: Ivan was always a good child, never disrespecting people. He was always interested in medical along with military combat. He listened to combine and looked up on them, hoping to become a officer.He was living in City 16 when a combine officer was shot. He was 23 at the time and helped the officer. The officer promised that he would be reccomended, along with training in technology. 6 years pass and he was a loyalist, helping the combine when needed. He usually would hang around the entrance of the nexus,cleaning up and receiving more points. He frequently turned in a couple of CP-killing rebels and even some murderers.He ignored the crime and continued to do his duty. And after of what seemed like decades, the combine trusted him and before he knew it, he was a level 5 loyalist. Just two days after a big contraband bust, he was sweeping the nexus floor when he saw a officer struggling with a rebel. He went ahead and tackled the rebel, getting shot three times in stomach while he did so. As the rebel was shot and killed by the officer, he realized that he needed to escape from this hectic city full of crime. He headed toward the trainstation, talking to a couple of high ranking officers. They agreed to transfer him to City 18, but he would have to start over again. Ivan nodded in approval and entered the train. The train started moving, and he was on his way to City 18.

---IC Information---
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Name: Ivan Arkadi Checkov
CID:#38136
Age:23
Country of origin: Russia
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Dark Red-Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Basic First Aid. Common combine tech.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
Not currently.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No.


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Le Slow App

Post  Le Slow on Mon May 28, 2012 2:26 am

Steam name: Le Slow
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:29036936
Age: 16 (Almost 17)
How long have you been roleplaying?: 2 1/2 years HL2RP. 4 years if you include things like TNB and PERP.

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/it A unit is walking his normal patrol route as he sees a citizen across the plaza with a 9mm pistol, It looks like he is showing it to his friend

/me yells "Don't move" and I unholster my loaded pistol, aiming at the armed citizen

/it The citizen freezes, hands in the air, gun still in hand

/me says "Drop it slowly!"

/it The citizen slowly bends down to drop it, but at the last second he aims it up at the unit and starts firing at the unit

/it The citizen roles and gets 21, The unit rolls and gets a 91

/it The citizen completely misses.

/me dives down for cover, transmitting a radio message: "11-99, 10-18! 10-20 is mid-plaza! 10-76 here immediatly!"

/it Another higher ranking unit hears the message and is quickly at the scene, weilding an MP7, He takes a peak out, firing at the citizen.

/it The citizen rolls a 12, the unit rolls an 18

/it The citizen is shot in the legs twice

/it The armed citizen falls down, the gun dropping, his friend fleeing

/it The higher Ranking unit runs after him into the slums

/me sprints to the armed man, kicking away the gun.

/me attempts to grab his body and make him face the ground and smear his face into it

/it The unit rolls 70, The citizen rolls 8

/it He gets flipped and the unit attempts to tie him

[LOOC] Citizen: No resist

/it He has been tied up

/it He is taken to containment.

/it An hour later an OfC comes to the door, takes him out into the interrogation room.

/it The unit interogates him

/it The citizen speaks about a Black Market Dealer in the slums, about his whereabouts and what he looks like

/it The citizen is givin a level 1 beating, 4 cycles in detainment and released with 5 points to his name



Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
John Donaman started off a baby, as all people do. He excelled in school but didn't hav social skills, so he didn't have many friends. After school he'd just come to his apartment with his drunk mom passed out of the floor and play on his nintendo, He was a very lonely boy. When he was 16 his mother died of liver failure, He went through fases of grief, but finally got over it in a couple months. By that time he was a Junior, he was pushed around, bullied, called names, but still always succeeded in school. He was near a state of suicide thoughts by the end of his senior year, he always tried to keep them out of his head, but they always were there. He didn't go into his senior prom, he didin't have a date, immediatly after getting out of highschool he went straight to college, at the time, he thought we wnated to be a medic. After the first class he decided to take random classes to see if any spiked his interest, one that did was engineering class, and sautering class, He excelled in them and liked them, after 6 years of going through various colleges he finally became an engineer, at that ime it was december in 2015. He had to go through training before becoming a full engineer and being able to work for any companies, during the training he felt and earthquake, stuff started falling, he was knocked unconsious. He woke up later, in a different world, A world ruled by the Universal Union.

Other: I've been CCA 7 times, 3 of those Times I have went to or over OfC. I know all the codes (Aslong as you don't have custon codes) I know how to breach Smile


---IC Information---
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Name: John Donoman
CID: 11768
Age: 26
Country of origin: Germany
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Gold Hazel

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I know how to fix things, Especially wired things, I also know very basic medical stuff as I took a medical class, but was soon to become a full engineer that specialized in wires.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Negative.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: None at all.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  5fr3 on Mon May 28, 2012 12:33 pm

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Steam name: Sir Jacob
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:40866245
Age: 14
How long have you been roleplaying?: 2-3 years.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me takes a can of Breen's water out of her pocket.

/me cracks open the top, taking a sip.

/me spits the horrid, chemically altered water in disgust, at the floor near CCA-CORE-05.57198.

/it CCA-CORE-05.57198 takes a stun stick out from his belt, turning off the safety in the same fluid motion.

/it The stun stick flashes on with sparks of blue light.

CCA-CORE-05.57198 says "Citizen."

CCA-CORE-05.57198 says "Wall."

/me looks in shock.

Alyx Vontel (Me) says "Look, it was an, uh, accident!"

Alyx Vontel says "I'm sorr-"

/it CCA-CORE-05.57198 attempts to hit Alyx Vontel with the stun stick.

.// CCA-CORE-05.57198 "Resist?"

.// Alyx Vontel "Yes."

/roll

*Alyx Vontel rolls a 15*

*CCA-CORE-05.57198 rolls a 46*

/it CCA-CORE-05.57198 hits Alyx Vontel with his stun stick.

Alyx Vontel says "Aghh!"

/it CCA-CORE-05.57198 unholsters his pistol

/it CCA-CORE-05.57198 aims it at her taking care not to pull the trigger accidently

CCA-CORE-05.57198 says "Wall."

CCA-CORE-05.57198 says "Final warning."



Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Rosa Night started as a popular child. She didn't really like talking though, but thats why everyone liked her. she never really said "No."She just agreed with what ever they said so she could continue her studies. She always read anatomy books, she held an "Intrest" in them.
She was trained in CPR, just for fun. She had all the training a 15 year old could want. She never thought she would use it, just, know it. That changed when her parents died at the hands of robbers. They threw gas bombs in her house, killing her parents leaveing her with minor brain damage. It doesn't impair her, unless the attacks come on, which only last for 10 minutes leaving her blind and, unable to walk. They come on ever so often, at a rate of about 2-4 times per month. They are set on by nervousness in groups of people but it really wouldn't impair her work. She had always wanted to be a part of something, and the Universal Union has supplied an opportunity.

---IC Information---
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Name: Rosa Night
CID: 93051
Age: 25
Country of origin: America
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:

I have a fairly large amount of medical knowlege.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:

I am a loyalist. I've helped stop on anti-citizen and helped find another.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:

No.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  D-Lop on Mon May 28, 2012 3:47 pm

Cherry hasn't been checking apps so I guess I will.


Sir Jacob:

Role play examples were good, just that I usually enforce the rule you have to be more specific then /me resists. Backstory was passable, but not that good, as it didn't give much detail into what happened after the gas attack, just mainly her skills and her brain damage.

ACCEPTED



Le Slow:

Role play examples were accurate and good, and the backstory was the best I've read so far, actually giving detail into what happened in his life.

ACCEPTED



OneCoolGeezer:

The roleplay examples weren't too interesting, and didn't really make sense near the end. For the backstory remember the combine killed everyone under the age of 18, so you would have been long dead. And they also wouldn't let someone in the Nexus every day unless they were a level five loyalist and could be trusted completely. They also don't let citizens learn about medical stuff legally. Re-post in at least two days with changes made for this app to be reviewed again.


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Please complete the application in the correct format for it to be judged.
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G-Mans New cca app

Post  [SoTA]G-Man on Mon May 28, 2012 4:38 pm

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Steam name:G-Man(MMNB)
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:31437618
Age:13
How long have you been roleplaying?:pretty much 8 months


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/it See's citizen run through the slums gate

/me sprints to stop the citizen

cca officer:"Hey citizen stop right there!"

citizen: "yes officer?"

cca officer:" You may not be Past these gates."

citizen: "I got permission From the DvL to go and get a sample of the biohazard."

cca officer:" What are you talking about, There is no biohazard in there."

/it gets kicked by citizen and watches him run away.

/me attempts to get up and chase after the citizen

cca officer:"Citizen!"

/it watches citizen trip on rock

/me attempts to kick citizen down

citizen:" Hey, I got permission from the DvL to be back here!"

CCA officer:"There is no biohazard back here!"

citizen:" Just let me Go I was meant to help the DvL out!"

CCA officer:"Get out of here, Now!"

citizen:"Fine, Just leave me alone."

/me pulls citizen up and pushes him towards the exit

/it watches citizen leave

CCA officer:" Now stay out and never come back here!"





Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Phil was a city10 local who loved working with mechanics and firing the smg when he was born when he was accompanied with his father being a mechanical engineer. when Phil was 6 years old he always helped his father with grinding metal and catching food by fishing They always had a 4'0 bass to come home with. When ben was 11 years old he met his friend kensie, They hung out all day and he found out her dad was a mechanical specialist just like his father Kensie was a free spirited girl with blonde hair but when he was 15 years old he found out she had been executed by the metro police for being caught after dark when she was supposed to be in bed. fter a few days Phil was lonely since his best friend was executed. when ben was 17 he was accompanied by his dad again, The reason was because his father made him start getting started with mechanical vehicles. Now that he is 18 he is now accompanied by mechanical tools as he also started shooting the smg that the combine use. Now he is in city18 where he will hopefully become part of the metro police force to bring a better living for citizens. All his life of hiding from the combine were gone


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Name:Phil Baker
CID:13947
Age:18
Country of origin:United States of America
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:He has always worked with mechanical objects and likes to fire the smg that the combine use


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:No


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:No




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Post  OneCoolGeezer on Wed May 30, 2012 6:39 pm

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Steam name: OneCoolGeezer
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:7292213
Age:12
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 years


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Looks around the room, focusing on a blood stain.
/it The blood stain seems to be fresh, also having a "butterfly" pattern.
/me walks closer to the stain.
/it A loud gunshot is heard outside.
/me whips around and looks out the window.
/it Outside the window, an infestation has begun of biotics.
/me quickly unholsters his MP7, loading a clip and clicking the safety off.
/me breaks the window with his foot and fires at the crowd of infected citizens.
/it The citizens begin falling, but more rise and slowly advance to the room.
/me quickly lobs a grenade, reloading his MP7.
/it The grenade drops in the middle of the crowd, then it explodes, sending bodies everywhere.
/me is hit by a flying body and is sent across the room into a wall.
/me hits the wall and slumps down.
/it The crowd of zombies seems to have vanished, bodies littering the ground outside.
/me gets up, dusting off his armor.
/it A loud siren is heard, as Civil Protection flood the area outside and dispose of the bodies.
/it After a few days, the plaza is cleaned and citizens roam around in it.
/me looks around, seeing a citizen with a gun.
/it A gunshot is heard, and a citizen falls down.
/me runs toward the man with the gun, unholstering and clicking off the safety of his MP7.
/it The man turns around and attempts to shoot the officer.
/it The man rolls 45
/it The officer rolls 42
/me is hit in the chest by a gunshot, but quickly attempts to fire at the man.
/it The officer rolls 64
/it The man rolls 23
/it The man is shot in the chest,leg,and neck.
/it The man's dead body falls to the floor and a blood pool forms.
/me clicks the safety on his MP7 and holsters it.
/me walks over to the dead body and drags it to the nexus, where it is destroyed.
/it A couple of other CCA members take care of the other citizen who was shot.
/me continues patrolling, walking around the plaza.

Character backstory: Ivan was always a good child, never disrespecting people. He was always interested in medical along with military combat. He listened to combine and looked up on them, hoping to become a officer.He was living in City 16 when a combine officer was shot. He was 23 at the time and helped the officer. The officer promised that he would be reccomended, along with training in technology. 6 years pass and he was a loyalist, helping the combine when needed. He usually would hang around the entrance of the nexus,cleaning up and receiving more points. He frequently turned in a couple of CP-killing rebels and even some murderers.He ignored the crime and continued to do his duty. And after of what seemed like decades, the combine trusted him and before he knew it, he was a level 5 loyalist. Just two days after a big contraband bust, he was sweeping the nexus floor when he saw a officer struggling with a rebel. He went ahead and tackled the rebel, getting shot three times in stomach while he did so. As the rebel was shot and killed by the officer, he realized that he needed to escape from this hectic city full of crime. He headed toward the trainstation, talking to a couple of high ranking officers. They agreed to transfer him to City 18, but he would have to start over again. Ivan nodded in approval and entered the train. The train started moving, and he was on his way to City 18.

---IC Information---
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Name: Ivan Arkadi Checkov
CID:#38136
Age:29
Country of origin: Russia
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Dark Red-Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Basic First Aid. Common combine tech.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
Not currently.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  D-Lop on Thu May 31, 2012 12:19 am

G-Man(=GW=):


The roleplay examples made sense, which was good, it's just that they weren't very accurate. You didn't seem to know much about CP roleplay, as you detain a citizen if they don't follow orders, especially tresspassing. You also had a few uncapitalizations, puncuation errors etc. which makes the app look rushed an unproffesional. The backstory wasn't that good either, with the same errors as the last one. Citizens can NOT have weapons and will be detained if found with one. Also citizens don't have jobs like engineer, they just sit around like bums all day or rebel. They also killed people under 18, and I'm pretty sure that the combine weren't around for 22 years, as you lived in a CP city from at least ages 6-18. Wait at least two days before re-posting.

DENIED


OneCoolGeezer:



The roleplay examples I liked, and they were more than 20 lines, which was a plus for you. They made sense and integrated rolls along with /me attempts. The backstory was good, and you fized the loyalist problem. One problem with the backstory is that you implied he was a child when CPs were around, but since the rest was fine, that really wasn't a big deal.

Btw I <3 you for <3ing Deus Ex lol.

ACCEPTED


|Dд| Spade:



The roleplay examples were okay, not great. They told a story, but it just didn't have as much detail as I would've liked. But atleast you used a form of a roll, so that's good. And they wouldn't kill you just for calling you a "Sick Bastard" unless of course, he had high number o' points, which you should've specified. They also don't let civvies get jobs, such as an engineer. They also don't really give "coins AKA tokens for helping CPs out. I noticed a few grammar errors such as no caps or wrong punctuation too. This one wasn't too bad, and I think next time you'll get it, wait two days before posting.


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Hopefully I didn't miss an app this time D:

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Re: CCA Application

Post  Spade on Thu May 31, 2012 12:23 am

D-Lop wrote:G-Man(=GW=):


The roleplay examples made sense, which was good, it's just that they weren't very accurate. You didn't seem to know much about CP roleplay, as you detain a citizen if they don't follow orders, especially tresspassing. You also had a few uncapitalizations, puncuation errors etc. which makes the app look rushed an unproffesional. The backstory wasn't that good either, with the same errors as the last one. Citizens can NOT have weapons and will be detained if found with one. Also citizens don't have jobs like engineer, they just sit around like bums all day or rebel. They also killed people under 18, and I'm pretty sure that the combine weren't around for 22 years, as you lived in a CP city from at least ages 6-18. Wait at least two days before re-posting.

DENIED


OneCoolGeezer:



The roleplay examples I liked, and they were more than 20 lines, which was a plus for you. They made sense and integrated rolls along with /me attempts. The backstory was good, and you fized the loyalist problem. One problem with the backstory is that you implied he was a child when CPs were around, but since the rest was fine, that really wasn't a big deal.

Btw I <3 you for <3ing Deus Ex lol.

ACCEPTED


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The roleplay examples were okay, not great. They told a story, but it just didn't have as much detail as I would've liked. But atleast you used a form of a roll, so that's good. And they wouldn't kill you just for calling you a "Sick Bastard" unless of course, he had high number o' points, which you should've specified. They also don't let civvies get jobs, such as an engineer. They also don't really give "coins AKA tokens for helping CPs out. I noticed a few grammar errors such as no caps or wrong punctuation too. This one wasn't too bad, and I think next time you'll get it, wait two days before posting.


DENIED


Hopefully I didn't miss an app this time D:

How did onecoolgeezer get CCA if your under 18 you get killed by the COMBINE SEE THIS IS BULL SHIT
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Re: CCA Application

Post  [SoTA]G-Man on Thu May 31, 2012 12:24 am

D-Lop wrote:G-Man(=GW=):I mentioned at the ending of the backstory I hid from the combine until I was safely 18


The roleplay examples made sense, which was good, it's just that they weren't very accurate. You didn't seem to know much about CP roleplay, as you detain a citizen if they don't follow orders, especially tresspassing. You also had a few uncapitalizations, puncuation errors etc. which makes the app look rushed an unproffesional. The backstory wasn't that good either, with the same errors as the last one. Citizens can NOT have weapons and will be detained if found with one. Also citizens don't have jobs like engineer, they just sit around like bums all day or rebel. They also killed people under 18, and I'm pretty sure that the combine weren't around for 22 years, as you lived in a CP city from at least ages 6-18. Wait at least two days before re-posting.

DENIED


OneCoolGeezer:



The roleplay examples I liked, and they were more than 20 lines, which was a plus for you. They made sense and integrated rolls along with /me attempts. The backstory was good, and you fized the loyalist problem. One problem with the backstory is that you implied he was a child when CPs were around, but since the rest was fine, that really wasn't a big deal.

Btw I <3 you for <3ing Deus Ex lol.

ACCEPTED


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The roleplay examples were okay, not great. They told a story, but it just didn't have as much detail as I would've liked. But atleast you used a form of a roll, so that's good. And they wouldn't kill you just for calling you a "Sick Bastard" unless of course, he had high number o' points, which you should've specified. They also don't let civvies get jobs, such as an engineer. They also don't really give "coins AKA tokens for helping CPs out. I noticed a few grammar errors such as no caps or wrong punctuation too. This one wasn't too bad, and I think next time you'll get it, wait two days before posting.


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Hopefully I didn't miss an app this time D:

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Re: CCA Application

Post  Noobstrike on Thu May 31, 2012 8:29 am

Wait what wuz the point of qutoeing the reviews of your cca app? :L
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Post  xbladeallen on Thu May 31, 2012 6:53 pm

Name:Stephen Shifflett
CID:86504
Age:24
Country of origin:Britain
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
I am a bit of a skilled medic and i know tons about technology such as how to repair them. With my knowledge of medicine i know how to fix bullet wounds antilon bites and minor amputations.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
I have not but i have been friends with some CCA.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No i have not.

Steam name:Xbladeallen
Steam ID: STEAM_
Age: 13
How long have you been roleplaying?:
2 years of darkrp
1 year of serious rp.

/It the citizen runs into the sector 2 sewers
/me runs at a fast speed to catch up to him
/it the citizen goes into the sewer entrence
/me Walks in after him
/me looks along the abandon subway
/it Citizen pulls out a handgun
/me looks to notice the armed citizen
/me pulls a ar2 out and aims at the armed citizen
/it citizen starts fireing
/me ducks behind a steel reinforced trash can while shooting back
/it citizen runs out of ammo tossing the 9mm aside and charges with fists.
/me pulls out a stun stick
/me turns the safety off
/it citizen still charging with fists raised in the air
/it sparks fly off stun stick
/it citizen attempts to round house kick the cp
/roll Citizen rolls 12 out of 100
/me swings the stun stick to knock the man out
/roll I roll 26 out of 100
/it citizen gets knocked out but regains stability quickly


Stephen Shifflett was a young handsome well still handsome british worker at the steel offices. He was the accountant. He came from a good family a sister a father and his mother. He was picked on though. Alot. So when he and so where the antagonists of his past came back he wanted to become a CCA officer to show them he is no longer no ones punching bag. He has good chances cause of his knowledge of the medical experience and technology experience.

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Re: CCA Application

Post  DeadCherry on Thu May 31, 2012 7:55 pm

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Make your roleplay examples for realistic rather than Roleplayish. I dont have time for a fancy review right now.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Tenacious Dee on Fri Jun 01, 2012 4:04 pm

Steam name: Deeydra
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:37702381
Age: 14
How long have you been roleplaying?: 2 years and 4 months.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/it A Citizen walks to me, worried.
/me Says " What is it Citizen?"
/it Remains silent
/me Sighs
/me Gently says " Get out of here"
/it The citizen remains quiet
/me Flicks his stunstick
/it The citizen starts running
/me Chases him
/it The citizen stops
/it The citizen says " I need directions, im new"
/me Says " Citizen, Face the wall"
/it The citizen faces it
/me Ties the citizen.
/it The citizen doesnt resist
/me Checks the citizen
/me Finds a razor
/it The citizen starts yelling " ITS NOT MINE, I SWEAR!"
/me Radios in: "We got a situation here..."
/me Flicks his stunstick
/me Radios in: " A citizen was carrying a razor, what should i do?"
/me Says gently " Its my first day, and i already got trouble"
/me Grabs the citizen by his neck, waiting for a response...




Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills:(
Joshua Petruckevitch was born on January 7, 1993 to a wealthy family north of St. Petersburg, Russia.

At childhood, he had curiosity about technology, his dad, worked at the army, disarming and arming bombs, since his dad was good, he taught Joshua how to disarm and fix radios and other stuff.

At 6th grade, he was the best in class, he had good friends, but one of them was envious of him, he sabotaged one of his science experiments. He got an C, his first in class, he went home, dissapointed, sad, but the most... Angry.

He started making a small car, made with scrap electronics, something made to hurt, he added some wires, to make it give electric shocks, not too strong, but not too weak at the same time.

He brought the car, and showed it to his friend, with evil intentions, he placed it in the ground, started it... pressed a button and... Boom, the car started making odd noises, throwing small lightnings to the carpet, slightly burning it. As the car approached to the kid, it gave him an electric shock, he stopped the car, saying it was an accident.

At 9th grade, he and his family moved to U.S, he was good at maths, and science. At school a girl fell in love with him, lately, he did too, they were on the same classes until 10th grade, when his mom died. He abadoned his studies. He had a lot of knowledge, wich helped him joining the army, to do the same his father did.

The day of the invasion, he was repairing a radio, when he managed to fix it, the radio was broadcasting something about an invasion, he tough it was a joke and changed the channel but everything was the same. He went home, to see his dad, an old man... he couldn't stand by himself. He went to get some rest, 7 hours later, he woke up, the door was blown down, waking him up, he went downstairs and saw people with heavy suits. They made him walk outside, as he walked, he heard a gunshot inside his house. They took him to a city, City 18, everyone was wearing the same suit, the people with heavy suits gave him a CID and a book with rules.

He heard one of the guys with the heavy suits, they needed help, repairing stuff. He spoke to them, since he knew a lot. He wanted to help, they gave him a paper, wrote everything the paper said. Hoping he was getting hired, walked away. Missing his home already.




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Name: Joshua Petruckevitch
CID: 84666
Age: 27
Country of origin: St. Petersburg, Russia.
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Hazel

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:

I Know a few things that could help about guns, and give me technology and i will handle it.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No, i haven't


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?
No, i haven't
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