Croskiller119 2nd app

Steam name:Croskiller119
Steam ID: STEAM 0:4:8435627
Age: 21
How long have you been roleplaying?: for as long as I can remember


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me see's a citizen at D6
/it the citizen walks in to D6
/me runs over to stop the citizen form tacking anther step
/it the citizen see's me and stars runing
/me orders the citizen to stop
/it citizen does not stop
/me stars runing after him calling for back up to get him
/it the citizen stars to go slower but goes on
/me gives a hard chase
/it the citizen jumps on to pipes and climes up it
/me sends a cca up their to get him down
/it the citizen gets to the top and stars runing agean
/me goes after the citizen by going up the lader
/it the citizen see's that he mite not make this jump
/me see's the citizen about to jump on to the roof of the after building
/it citizen jumps and shows that he is a rebel when he jumped off
/me calls in more ccas to get him
/it the rebel finds after cca's waiting for him but 3 more rebels come out and pulls out smgs
/me tacks out a smg and fires at them with the after ccas
/it the rebels got 5 ccas and shot me in the left leg
/me still goes on with a wound

Character backstory (6 lines at le
ast detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):the year 2025,sptember 05, I was transferred form city 8 to city 18 its not the same but at lest they well get hard hitter and a good gunner on the combines team at lest but all I know is its a hole new city.unlike my family I was Tackin form them and put in this armed suit but I don't really remember them well at lest most of them but all that maters is that I don't have to wearer about them any more.but after a long time in this city and well at lest its not like city 18 with all that gun fire going on but like I seed its a beater city but even still I have been trained to be a guard and fight that's all but I am a hard hitter when it comes to hand to hand and hand weapons to but that's really all I know about being a cca

---IC Information---
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Name:Hunter shifflet
CID:4765238
Age: 19
Country of origin: U.S.A
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Green

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: well I know some Medical like moth to moth and that choking life saver and lots of technology stuff to


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: nope


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: nope

Croskiller: Denied

So many things are wrong with this app: Spelling, grammar, capitalization, punctuation... the list goes on. However, I shouldn't even be commenting on that considering you posted it in the wrong spot twice. Post it in the CCA application sticky as a reply. I'm not trying to be mean but, come-on man. Put some time into your app and follow directions.

Reapply in 2 days.

Can you show me were and I well fix it with in the 2 days?

and one thing I don't capitalization its not like me I don't like to do it so whats the point their is nothing wrong with no capitalization. Unless its really needed then I well do it cuse I never do it when I talk so its not like me.

I think your just trolling bro.

I think if he pulls this again we should make him wait a substantial amount of time like 2 weeks rather then 2 days. I don't want something like this to become a regular thing. Either make a serious app or don't post at all.