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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  Evan Beck on Sun Jun 17, 2012 12:59 am

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DeadCherry wrote:Steam name:
Steam ID:
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: one year


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)
/me walks down hall of 45th apartments
/me stops and looks out window as i look out i see a blood stain on the window /me puts bucket filled with water and a towel on the ground then pulls the towel out /me starts scrub the blood stain off in a up and down motion /me stops scrubing and looks at window /it window is spotless /me puts towel back in bucket /me picks up bucket then walks futher down hallway
/me keeps walking down the hallway /me makes a left then see a combine and a citizen /combine say's face the wall now! /citizen say's this is the 6'th time i said no! /combine pulls' out stun stick and flicks it to high /citizen push'es combine to the floor /citizen run's down hall /m/me runs to combine /me say's masssster you mussst get up!
/combine get's up and pulls pistol out
/combine aims for citizen then fire's
/citizen fall's to the ground and grabs leg while screaming
/combine run's to citizen then put's pistol in holster and pull's out stun stick and hit's citizen in the head four times knocking him out
/me runs to combine massster you got him
/combine pulls zip-tie out then ties citizen
/combine picks up citizen and throw's citizen on his back
/combine turn's to me and say's clean up this mess or you'll be shot next
/me say's yessss massster

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):i never had a family,my job is to keep city 18 clean,i was never a biotic slave i was as free as a bird once till the combine brain washed me into calling every combine in city 18 masssster and keeping the place clean they also put some robot parts on me and told me what to do,loves cats,hats dog's,loves to color in color books,does not like music one bit,when i hear a loud bell noise i get scared,love's the color blue,loves to play rock paper scissor's,Will help any one thats hurt even if its a stranger.


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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)
Name:zun'hun
Age:28
Skin tone colour:dark green
Eye colour:red and orange in the center of each eye
Scars/Marks:long scar on back

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?:medical knowlege


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:when they put the robot parts on me because it hurt a little

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:i plan to keep city 18 clean and have fun rp'ing with him




All applications MUST be posted in this thread. Any that are not will be DENIED..
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Enslaved Biotic app for Jek'raul

Post  [SoTA]G-Man on Mon Jun 25, 2012 4:03 am

Steam name:[SoTA]G-Man
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:31437618
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?: 1 year


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)
/me Starts scrubbing door frame in circular motion
CCA-CORE-04.76542:"Biotic, you missed a spot."
Jek'raul:"Yess, Sorry Masterrr
/me scrubs frame faster
CCA-HELIX-04.84765:"Great work Biotic."
Jek'raul:"Thankssss Massster."
/me drops towel
/it Core leaves room
/me picks up towel and starts scrubbing faster
CCA-HELIX-04.84765:"I will leave you to your work Biotic."
Jek'raul:"Okay masssterr."
/me starts scrubbing window
/it Helix leaves the room
/me Stops scrubbing and itches his back
/me Starts scrubbing again
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"Biotic!"
/me drops towel and shivers
Jek'raul:"Yesss Massster?"
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"We've gotten complaints that you've been slacking off!"
Jek'raul:"Nonsense....Massster."
/me Picks up and moves to the next window
/it 01 dumps can of water on previous window
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"Clean it up,Biotic!"
Jek'raul:"Yesss Masssster!"
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"No yelling biotic!"
/me shivers and drops towel again
CCA-CORE-01.87244 Flicks his stunstick to high voltage
/me shakes
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"Pick it up, Biotic!"
/it electricity comes out of Jek'raul's palms shocking the 01
Jek'raul:"Massster, are you alrighttt?"
/me pulls him up
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"Biotic you are coming with me."
/me shoots more lightning knocking him uncontious
/it HELIX walks in the room
CCA-HELIX-DvL.85766:"Biotic, What have you done?"
Jek'raul:"Ssssorry Massster."
/it HELIX pulls AR2 out
Jek'raul:"Massster pleassse forgive me."
/it HELIX cocks his AR2
/me shoots a electric bolt killing the DvL
Jek'raul:"Oh know, what hasss I done?"





Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
Jek'raul was always one of the older Biotics, one day he was at his home and a group of CCA bursts through the door and they grab Jek'raul's wrist and said "Let's go!" And Jek'raul shakes and get's yanked by the force.

Jek'raul was sent to city18 to be an enslaved biotic and be controlled by the CCA forces and was always made to clean windows,Door frames,anything he was able to clean, He soon got good at it and enjoyed to clean.

He was soon called out to the Helix DvL and was given a cleaning reward and was one of their favorite Biotics but things soon became wrong, Since the war started he was beaten and abused in anyway possible.


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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)
Name: Jek'raul
Age:178
Skin tone colour:greenish pale
Eye colour: Red
Scars/Marks: left wrist

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: Good at making things clean, Has electricity come out of his palms


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?: Nope

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?: I plan to have him be a very highly respected vortigaunt



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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  Spade on Mon Jun 25, 2012 4:53 am

Steam name:|Dд| Spade
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:23876595
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?:About an hour



20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)

/Me Starts cleaning window

/it Windows have a blood stain dripping down

/me Cleans blood off

CCA:Hurry up

Pau'Tek:Yessss Masster

CCA:Haha

/me Starts scrubbing faster

/it The window dries

/it The CCA Pours soda on the window

CCA:Clean it up.Haha

/me Attempts to shock the 03

/roll Biotec "74"

/roll CCA "92"

/Radio Requesting back up "404"

Pau'Tek:Sorry Massster

CCA:/me Pulls out stunstick flicking safety off

Helix:03 Put it down,This creature cant control itself

Pau'Tek:Thank you masster

CCA:/me Turns safety on

CCA:/me Holsters Stunstick

Helix:Get back to work

Pau'Tek:Thank you Masster

/me Starts scrubbing next window

/me Gets towel wet

/it Dirt slide's off windows

/me Dry's window

/me Picks up bucket

/me Starts Cleaning next window

/me Scrub and dry windows

Pau'Tek:Massster im done cleaning the windowss

CCA:Good job,Get back to the nexus

Pau'Tek:Yess Masster

/me Walks to nexus









Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Pau'Tek grew up on the outside the Xen Slave Camp.He grew up in a family of 3 His mother and his brother Gre'Tek.as a child he was bored and couldn't understand anything.He didn't understand anything until,One day he was moved to earth.Then when he was found in 2017 the CCA found him thinking 'We could use more biotec's".They took him to to the nexus putting a tracking device on him.He woke up one day with strange clothing on.He had gotten up and went outside being told to scrub the windows.As he scrub the windows his towel dropped as a CCA ran up to him saying "Pick up the towel" As he picked up the towel he started scrubbing again.When an anti citizen ran by with a smg,He got scared and accidently shocked him.The CCA granted him for getting an Anti-Citizen off the list.When his masster told him to go back to the nexus he said "Woww Thisss is a great city".As he woke up the next day he was told to do the same objective.As he scrubbed the window his master told him to pick up the soda can when he did he put it in the trash can.After he was done working Pau'Tek Said 'I can start getting usse to thiss".


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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)
Name:Pau'Tek
Age:147
Skin tone colour:Green/Teal
Eye colour:Red
Scars/Marks:Left arm

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?:Pau'Tek is good with Medical and Powers such as electricity.Pau'Tek is a young Biotic with an an obey philosophy.And gets angry when frightend by a citizen or CCA (he doesn't control it he gets mad easily).


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:No my character is obedient because he fears someone who can injure him badly.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:Serve the combine and be loyal to the combine.Since he fears the Combine he will serve them good.So Pau'Tek can be one of my finest characters and it will be good for Role playing.
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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Wed Jun 27, 2012 12:09 am

Steam name: DIABLO258
Steam ID:
Age: 16
How long have you been roleplaying?: about 4 years now.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)

/me walks down the side walk to the stain of blood from an amputation incident
/it The CCA officer notices me and motions his stun stick at the blood and says "Get to work, Biotic."
/me Responds with "Yes Massterrr..." and I get my cloth out and start to wipe it up
/it Another Unit aproaches us and informs the CCA Officer of an anti-citizen in the plaza
/me I listen in on the conversation as I clean
/it The CCA Officer nods and walks with the other Unit to the scenario
/me I finish cleaning and decide to sit and take a break while the Units are busy
/it a citizen walks up to me and curiously asks "Are you hungry, vort?"
/me I say "Yessss... Lok'Tar Issss veeerry hungrrry..."
/it The citizen then explains how he could feed me in an innocent way
/me "Noooo... Massster has a feeding ssssschedual for Lok'Tar...." I then pretend as if I cannot hear the man, so he will go away to avoid my own punishment
/it the man leaves, but the CCA Unit returns to me at a very fast paste
/me I quickly sit up "Hello maaaster...."
/it "Skip it Biotic. There are blood stains in the plaza. Get on it."
/me "Of coursssse.... Anything for you..." I put my hands together and bow to the Unit, hoping he will not get angry at me
/it The officer simply nods and walks off to his gaurding point
/me I walk to the blood stains in the plaza and begin to clean as citizens surround me
/it Whispers are heard from the citizens "What happend?", "Oh no...", "Is that blood..."
/me I ignore the comments and continue cleaning, wiping up every spot of blood on the pavement, watering it down, and repeating untill its all gone
/it Once the stains are gone, the crowd clears and the CCA officer is seen in the back watching me
/me I stand up after my task is completed and nod at the officer to signal that my work is done
/it The unit nods and walks up to me "Biotic, get inside the Nexus. The other Units have some work for you."
/me "Yeeees maasssster... right awaaay..." and I walk off to the nexus
/it On my way, I turn to look at the Officer who just told me my orders, and I see him bow to me and laugh, then walk away
/me I smile and continue my day of work

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Lok'Tar lived with a family of 3. Him, his mother, and his father. Lok'Tar was born into a peaceful family with no one to fight or hurt. How ever, they lived in Xen and worked constantly for the Nihilanth. Lok'Tar was forced to work at a young age, quickly learning that life was not very fun. He spent his entire childhood working, and being beaten into doing more work. His mother and father worked in a seperate facility, so he was alone. Lok'Tar lived that way for many years, making his personality rough, and tempered at points. But as he grew, Lok'Tar took a facination into the "Little things" In life. The things that make you smile, but are just small enough to go on un-noticed by anyone else. After growing into an adult and working full time, his parents passed away when they were killed by Humans during the resonance cascade. They were told to go fight, and were confronted by the military. Quickly taken down. Lok'Tar was soon told to go fight, but he hid and managed to evade the draft. Then the Combine came back into his life. He was captured and forced to be a slave again. He was sent to City 18 for his first assignment. And even though Lok'Tar grew up with a rough start, he still enjoys those little things. And thats what keeps him working happily to this day.


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Name: Lok'Tar
Age: 38
Skin tone colour: Dark Green
Eye colour: Light Blue
Scars/Marks: Scars along his Neck and down his back
Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: Good with heavy lifting, and also skilled with hard to remove stains on any type of wall or floor.

Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?: No problems. Although he didnt like it, he never fought back.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?: Work full time for the CCA and be loyal. But, If the wind starts to blow in a diffrent direction, there are other possibility's...


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Annoying Roosters Vortiguant Application

Post  Annoying Rooster on Wed Jun 27, 2012 12:35 am



Steam name: The Annoying Rooster

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:29039659

Age: 17

How long have you been roleplaying?: Quite a long while. Numbers, I could say 3-4 years.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)

[**Wil'Har's forearm lurches off to the damped rag, his fingers grasping around as the water oozes from the silk, his hingers clamping tightly as the water wringles from the rag, planting it against the dirted tinted glass, scrubbing it from side to side, slowly becoming visible again.

**A rather well heighted individual approaches. His voice replying in a carckily and chopping tone, his foot coming into contact with the bucket lightly as water merely spills, ''Biotic, what is taking you, I say?''

**The neon green figure remains still at the approach of the figure, it's slender neck twisting off as his eyes divert off to the masked individual, ''Ah~.. And what is it thee wishes?..'' the creature states

**C8_UNION.01.95243 remains rather silent, her tinted lens shooting off to the window ceil, before glancing back, ''.. Get on with it.'' she replies in a haste, returning a gaze off to the plaza aside, her trenchcoat spinning during the process

**Wil'Har's head glances off into the pink smoged sky, as the September mist drops against his face, he seems locked in a trance of the sensative moment

**The free moment dosen't last long, as the ladder shakes violently, 95243's fingers grip tightly around the handle as she vibrates the ladder, ''Oi.. What is with the commotion, Biotic? Enough slacking, and work!''

**Merely caught in loss of balance, immediatly reviving his incapitation as his fingers clamp around the stool of the ladder, glancing back off to the barley visible window above, his fingers grasping at the rag once again, dragging it along the window as it slowly begins to become visible once again

**C8_UNION.01.95243 returns a glance off back to the plaza once again, the baton remaining idle off at her side as it pats lightly against the battle robe aside

**Wil'Har's eyes divert off back to the individual, as of out of sudden, his hooves slipping on the step stool as the creature begins to descend at such a fast speed, his body colliding with the unit below

**The figure immediatly collapses, as it returns a disgusted look behind her mask, with her trained streangth, heaving her from her back, pushing herself to her feet as she begins to wipe away at any substance along her rone

**The creature begins to clamber to it's feet aswell, it's shackles clink against the ladder as it drops it's back against the wall aside, glancing at the unit

**C8_UNION.01.95243's arms lurch around to her burlap, retracting a distinctive copper rod, gripping the knob as she twists it clock-wise, sparks emitting from the tip as she approaches the creature, ''Biotic! Face the wall! Now!'' shrieking at the top of her lungs

**Wil'Har merely clambers to it's hooves, gazing at the creature as it reverses to it's direction, multiple pupils glancing at the rowed brick wall, it's lips tightening as it remains rather silent

**The figure brings her baton back, thrusting it against the back of it's legs, expecting it's nerves to immediatly to react for it to drop to a minor fetal position, taking another swing at the back of it's head

**The creature merely limps as it feels the painful wave overwhelming his legs, immediatly clutching at it's legs, the rod coming into contact to the back of it's head, it's arms gripping at it's head

**C8_UNION.01.95243 re-postures herself, her battle robe swinging lightly as she raises her copper rod, jerking it lightly as expecting for the creature to wince at the close encounterment

**Wil'Har arms flail, expecting for another attack of the copper rod once again, only to find it cease inches to his face, sparks emitting as it drops to the concrete below

**The masked figures eyes make contact with Wil'Har's pupils, tightening it's grip before replying, ''Now.. Apologize, I say..''

**The creature merely clambers to it's feet, planting it's hands in a palm as it sputters, ''Bagh.. M-my.. My most sincered apologies..''

**C8_UNION.01.95243 baton drops back to it's side, studying it as her eyes scan up and down, before gesturing off to the plaza ''Back to the Nexus with you, Biotic.''


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Wil'Har was at a relativly young age, kicking along the dusty ground below, following along with other kinsmen like groups, hunting the Xenian creatures as the incapitate, paralyze, and charred into edable meals. A rather non-satisfying adventure, but it commits to his survival, just like the group. On spare free time, they would hudlle in stalagmite fortresses, and homes, around a small boiled fire pot, speaking of old folktales of there prophet, 'Raziah'.

Wil'Har developed his way with his arura abilities, and the kinsmen around his nature like terrain were relativly his close harness ship of brothers and sisters. However, this experience was scrapped as a blue like misfitted hole arosen in the stars above. Creature like ships descending from the sky above, armed individuals, weapons leveled and trained at himself, and his kinsmen, as they were bind in a African American slave like chains, loaded into a boated like container, strapped to the walls as they took a glimpse at there home land, before huddling in darkness as the door closes. Fearing against there will.

Wil'Har had his ethusiasm gained, due to his parture experiences on his home planet. Before he knew it, he was dressed in a diaper like outfit, and doused in chains as individuals in mask like outfittings, and batons. He was given specific directives to remove any scrap material, and vacate to the next section, repeating the process. Countless times to be resistful, he would be strucked repeadetly to the stinging sensation of the elctricity, when he learned his partnership with his kinsmen on there new duties, locked as what the individuals called, a 'Janitor' like work.



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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)

Name: Wil'Har

Age: 63

Skin tone colour: Neon Green.

Eye colour: Blood Red.

Scars/Marks: N/A.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: Wil'Har has a rather grim arura, but his essence is also used in absorbing wounds alike, and medical procedures.

He also can preform an electrical-magnetic volt current that not only preformed in self-defense, but for techinician uses.


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?: From my point of view, not really.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?: Enhance roleplay for future events, and the individuals around to preform passive, and standard roleplay.


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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Wed Jun 27, 2012 12:54 am

Wow. Impressive.
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Post  profile_#name on Wed Jun 27, 2012 6:53 am

Steam name: The Яake / Colonel Cluster Fuck
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:30028117
Age: 15
How long have you been roleplaying?: Three years


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)

/it It was a quiet day in the plaza, The pairs of two Civil Protection officers patrolling here and there, Citizens walking around as an OTA unit watched over from a barricade

/me awakes from his light nap on a pile of cardboard boxes, Looking around and mumbling something in vortigeese as he began his daily walk, Walking around the plaza inspecting and picking up various items of litter.

Me: Why must these citizenssss enjoy being ssso polluted.

/me continues to walk around, Walking up to an officer.

/it The officer turns to face the vortigaunt, Placing his hand on the butt of his stunstick, Ready to draw it.

/me looks at the officer

Me:Is there anything massster would wish for Null' Gath to preform?

CCA-CORE-02.80080: Negative, Move along!

Me: As you wish, Massster.

/me bows his head and head off to the CAH to wonder around aimlessly.

/it The CAH doors open as Sixx and Isaac go running back into D6, Three Civil Protection officers give chase while firing randomly at them.

/me watches as they do so, Quietly rushing into the nexus to get out of the way of gunfire

Me: Null' Gath does not understand such violence.

/me makes his way to the window and views the shootout

/it OTA Rushes from the D2 Hardpoint and take cover at the pillar and corner across from the CAH doors, Opening fire.

/me slowly walks away from the window, Ignoring all the violence and making his way up the stairs looking for a room to idle in until the shooting stops.

/me continuously mumbles things in vortiguese.

/it A group of citizens shove past the vort to go catch a sight of the fire-fight.

/me has the thought of exploding them with his powers but dismisses it for his powers are disabled.

Me: Grruph...

**Server crashes and this is the 20 lines of RP


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Null' Gath was a quiet vort, Always good with mechanical objects and medical situations. Null' Gath specializes in almost every task.


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Name: Null' Gath
Age: 19 (in human years)
Skin tone colour: grey - white
Eye colour: Dark brown - Black
Scars/Marks: Faint tribal like skin markings

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: Medical, Technology


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:
Null' Gath never really had an opinion on the government

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:
I plan to have him work on Medical Technology Advancment for the CCA

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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  Annoying Rooster on Wed Jun 27, 2012 2:34 pm

Just to quickly point out, Vortigaunts speak in a language known as 'Flux'. Vortigese is just multiple languages, but it could relate to Flux, aswell.
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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Wed Jun 27, 2012 8:01 pm

"Vortigese is the native language of the Vortigaunts. It is used by them for communication purposes and sometimes to help them conjure up their electrical attacks." - Half Life Wiki

"Vortigaunts possess their own native form of vocal communication, which, in Half-Life 2, is referred to as "flux shifting", and can be heard in rare instances when two Vortigaunts are engaged in conversation." - Half Life Wiki

It seems that Vortigese would be used to summon attacks, or communicate with other species. Flux shift on the other hand is the language used to communicate with other vortigaunts.

Or im entirely wrong and they are both called the same thing, but used in different scenarios.
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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  Spade on Thu Jun 28, 2012 5:54 am

Steam name:|Dд| Spade
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:23876595
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?:1 hour


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)

/Me Starts cleaning window

/it Windows have a blood stain dripping down

/me Cleans blood off

CCA:Hurry up

Pau'Tek:Yessss Masster

CCA:Haha

/me Starts scrubbing faster

/it The window dries

/it The CCA Pours soda on the window

CCA:Clean it up.Haha

/me Attempts to shock the 03

/roll Biotec "74"

/roll CCA "92"

/Radio Requesting back up "404"

Pau'Tek:Sorry Massster

CCA:/me Pulls out stunstick flicking safety off

Helix:03 Put it down,This creature cant controll itself

Pau'Tek:Than you masster

CCA:/me Turns safety on

CCA:/me Holsters Stunstick

Helix:Get back to work

Pau'Tek:Thank you ssir

/me Starts scrubbing next window

/me Gets towel wet

/it Dirt slide's off windows

/me Dry's window

/me Picks up bucket

/me Starts Cleaning next window

/me Scrub and dry windows

Pau'Tek:Massster im done cleaning the windowss

CCA:Good job,Get back to the nexus

Pau'Tek:Yess Masster

/me Walks to nexus









Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Pau'Tek grew up on the outside the Xen Slave Camp.He grew up in a family of 3 His mother and his brother Gar'Tek.as a child he was bored and couldn't understand anything.He didn't understand anything until,One day he was moved to earth.Then when he was found in 2017 the CCA found him thinking 'We could use more biotic's".They took him to to the nexus putting a tracking device on him.He woke up one day with strange clothing on.He had gotten up and went outside being told to scrub the windows.As he scrub the windows his towel dropped as a CCA ran up to him saying "Pick up the towel" As he picked up the towel he started scrubbing again.When an anti citizen ran by with a smg,He got scared and accidentally shocked him.The CCA granted him for getting an Anti-Citizen off the list.When his masster told him to go back to the nexus he said "Woww Thisss is a great city".As he woke up the next day he was told to do the same objective.As he scrubbed the window his master told him to pick up the soda can when he did he put it in the trash can.After he was done working Pau'Tek Said 'I can start getting usse to thiss".


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Name:Pau'Tek
Age:147
Skin tone colour:Green/Teal
Eye colour:Red
Scars/Marks:Left arm

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?:Pau'Tek is good with Medical and Powers such as electricity.Pau'Tek is a young Biotic with an an obey philosophy.And gets angry when frightend by a citizen or CCA (he doesn't control it he gets mad easily).


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:No my character is obedient because he fears someone who can injure him badly.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:Serve the combine and be loyal to the combine.Since he fears the Combine he will serve them good.So Pau'Tek can be one of my finest characters and it will be good for Role playing.


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Post  profile_#name on Thu Jun 28, 2012 2:38 pm

He is obedient but tries to shock an 03 that pours soda on the window just for laughs?
ok.
Other than that is was a enjoyable read. lol

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Russian Cosmonauts application

Post  RainbowFlare on Sat Jun 30, 2012 12:29 am

Steam name:Russian Cosmonaut
Steam ID:" STEAM_0:1:50394623 14:18
Age:16
How long have you been roleplaying?: Ive been rping for about 2 years


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)
/me Breathes in a big breath.
/it The floor has grime and empty cups on it.
/me Grabs broom, sweeps all the garbage together.
/me Looks at a combine watching me.
/me Continues to work with the garbage.
/it The combine throws a can at me.
/me Puts hands up just in time to block.
/it Combines flicks on stunstick and slowly walks over.
/me Starts shaking in fear.
/me Drops down to knees and begs the master not to hurt me.
/it Combine begins to beat me until im knocked out.
/me Lays there defeated and wounded from the stunstick beating.
/it The cmbine laughs and walks away.
/me Feels warm soft hands on skin and slowly being dragged.
/me wakes up in a couch in the middle of the a aprtment with a rebel doctor looking over me.
/me Asks "Wwwhy doess the two handsss were the red cross on her back?"
/it The medic smiles and continues treating my wounds from the stunstick beating.
/me Lays head back down and falls asleep.
/me Wakes up to find the apartment empty.
/it The windows are grimy.
/me Grabs towel and begins to lcean it...

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): My character was a vortiguant rebel before he was inslaved. He was a apprentice of a medic during the war, and learned much from her, her name was Daisy and my character was very close to her. They went every were together even into battle to help save lives. But one day they were in the wrong place at the wrong time. Daisy ended up getting shot in the heart and instantly collapsed. But as loyal as my character was would not leave her so they ended up perishing together Daisys body was dragged away. But Fuh'Dal was knocked out by a combine with the butt of a ar2. Thus begins his life as a enslaved combine but still Fuh'Dal has the burning sensation of a rebel in his heart and will continue fighting.


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Name:Fuh'Dal
Age: Forgot cannot remember his age
Skin tone colour: Light green
Eye colour:Red in the outer center orange in the middle.
Scars/Marks: one vetical scar on hi cheek.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: My character is strong with the vortessence so he has a great way with medical knowledge.


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:No i did not.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:Become strong and serve my masters with my life.


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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Sat Jun 30, 2012 12:41 pm

Goodness me... Lots of people want to be a biotic... I hope I get accepted.
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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  That Generous Fish. on Sun Jul 01, 2012 9:26 pm

Steam name:[SoTA][TFN]That Generous GUY
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:42215857
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: One and a half year i think


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.) The vortigaunt walks around in the Nexus.

*A units walks up to him and rams a towel in to his chest and yells:*

MPF: Clean this floor!
Me: Of course, master.
/me get down by lowering himself to the floor and cleans the dirt of it.
*Another unit passes by as he look at him with a deadstare*
/me looks up at him with innocent eyes, feeling the chill go up his spine.
/me goes back to clean the floor.
*A units comes up.*
MPF: Get outside Biotic!
Me: Yes, master.
*They both go outside.*
MPF: Clean the CWU store!
Me: But of course, master.
/me grabs the mop and goes back and forth on the wooden floor.
*A citizen looks at the Vortigaunt, with pityful eyes and asks*
Citizen: Vortigaunt, are you alright?
/me looks back at the citizen with a smile, but it suddenly drops as a MPF units grabs the citizen by the shoulder and aggressivly turns him around and yells in his face:
MPF: Do not talk to the Vortigaunt!
/me looks back with a bitter face and goes back to mopping the floor.
*The citizen looks at the Vortigaunt once again, and sighs.*


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): When Sach'wa was a little vortigaunt, his mother was killed by the combine. The combine had invaded hes homeland. His father managed to escape the combine, but without Sach'wa. Sach'wa wasn't found by the combine though. He was hiding in the house when the combine killed his mother, and ran after his father. From that day on, he swor, that he was gonna do something about those combine. But after some weeks, he lost hope. No one ever came to rescue him. He was just all alone in his house.

Finally after some months, some vortigaunts came to his house. There we three of them. One of them was wounded. He died after some time. Sach'wa was so happy to see some other vortigaunts.
After some time, they decided to leave the house. They knew that the combines was coming. They took Sach'wa with them, cause the knew what the combine did to little vortigaunts.

Then the Black Mesa incident occurred. The two vortigaunts that Helped him, died. He was a grown up vortigaunt when the incident occurred, so he had known the two vortigaunts for a long time. He then found some other vortigaunts and grouped up with them. Sach'wa and the others didn't know what do about the combine invasion, so they decided to head to a planet called earth. When they arrived, the 7 hour war began. They got a leader called Nihilanth. Nihilanth and the group helped the rebels fight against the combines. Nihilanth died later on in the fight. Then Sach'wa meet a rebel called Lucy Barber. She was one the rebels. Sach'wa fighted against the combine along whit her.

One day, Sach'wa got shot in the leg, by one of the elite combines. His wound wasn't big, but it was a special bullet, that stunned Sach'wa. Some time after that, Sach'wa woke up in a big room, full of other vortigaunts. He was confused. He didn't know if he was saved by some rebels, or he was captured by the combine. He asked some of the vortigaunts if they knew what was going on. He found out, that he was captured by the combine. Then he was brought to a city called City 18. From now on, he was gonna live his life, cleaning floors...


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Name:Sach'wa
Age: 134
Skin tone colour: Light brown
Eye colour: Very red
Scars/Marks:3 big Scars on the left shoulder, bruisies on the feet

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: I know how to fix computer's

Im ok at philosophy

My mom teached me how to clean effectively whit a mob before she got killed

Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?: I was fighting the Combine (In backstory)

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?: Roam the streets of city 18 whit a hopeless attitude making the citizens feel bad while doing whatever the Combine wants me to do
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G-Man's Enslaved Biotic App

Post  [SoTA]G-Man on Mon Jul 02, 2012 9:08 pm

Steam name:[SoTA]G-Man
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:31437618
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?: 1 year


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)
/me Starts scrubbing door frame in circular motion
CCA-CORE-04.76542:"Biotic, you missed a spot."
Jek'raul:"Yess, Sorry Masterrr
/me scrubs frame faster
CCA-HELIX-04.84765:"Great work Biotic."
Jek'raul:"Thankssss Massster."
/me drops towel
/it Core leaves room
/me picks up towel and starts scrubbing faster
CCA-HELIX-04.84765:"I will leave you to your work Biotic."
Jek'raul:"Okay masssterr."
/me starts scrubbing window
/it Helix leaves the room
/me Stops scrubbing and itches his back
/me Starts scrubbing again
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"Biotic!"
/me drops towel and shivers
Jek'raul:"Yesss Massster?"
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"We've gotten complaints that you've been slacking off!"
Jek'raul:"Nonsense....Massster."
/me Picks up and moves to the next window
/it 01 dumps can of water on previous window
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"Clean it up,Biotic!"
Jek'raul:"Yesss Masssster!"
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"No yelling biotic!"
/me shivers and drops towel again
CCA-CORE-01.87244 Flicks his stunstick to high voltage
/me shakes
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"Pick it up, Biotic!"
/it electricity comes out of Jek'raul's palms shocking the 01
Jek'raul:"Massster, are you alrighttt?"
/me pulls him up
CCA-CORE-01.87244:"Biotic you are coming with me."
/me shoots more lightning knocking him uncontious
/it HELIX walks in the room
CCA-HELIX-DvL.85766:"Biotic, What have you done?"
Jek'raul:"Ssssorry Massster."
/it HELIX pulls AR2 out
Jek'raul:"Massster pleassse forgive me."
/it HELIX cocks his AR2
/me shoots a electric bolt killing the DvL
Jek'raul:"Oh know, what hasss I done?"





Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
Jek'raul was always one of the older Biotics, one day he was at his home and a group of CCA bursts through the door and they grab Jek'raul's wrist and said "Let's go!" And Jek'raul shakes and get's yanked by the force.

Jek'raul was sent to city18 to be an enslaved biotic and be controlled by the CCA forces and was always made to clean windows,Door frames,anything he was able to clean, He soon got good at it and enjoyed to clean.

He was soon called out to the Helix DvL and was given a cleaning reward and was one of their favorite Biotics but things soon became wrong, Since the war started he was beaten and abused in anyway possible.


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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)
Name: Jek'raul
Age:178
Skin tone colour:greenish pale
Eye colour: Red
Scars/Marks: left wrist

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: Good at making things clean, Has electricity come out of his palms


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?: Nope

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?: I plan to have him be a very highly respected vortigaunt

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Ob02's Vortigaunt Application

Post  Ob02 on Mon Jul 02, 2012 11:33 pm

Steam name: Ob02
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:31603570
Age: 19
How long have you been roleplaying?: Roughly seven months.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me:
/me walks up to CCA.
Me: "Orderss.... Master?"
CCA: "<:: Haha"
CCA: "<:: Clean up the plaza."
Me: "Yes.... master..."
/me walks into the plaza.
/it Litter and cans are everywhere.
/me sighs, but starts picking up cans and putting them in the trash cans.
/me notices two citizens fighting.
/me glares at the citizens.
*The citizens stop fighting and look at the vortigaunt.*
Me: "Humans, stop fighting. Must a greater power intervene?"
/me turns his head and continues picking up trash as the citizens walk away.
/me puts the last piece of trash in the trash can, he walks up to another CCA."
Me: "I have finished previous tasks, master.... Do you have anymore requests?"
/me stares at the CCA, waiting for a reply.
CCA: "<:: Go clean the civil worker's union store windows, and stop staring at me!"
*The CCA hands the vortigaunt a bucket and towel.*
Me: "Yes... master.... Sorry, master...."
/me goes into the store, places the bucket onto the ground, and begins to clean the windows.
/it The water from the towel leaks down the window, dripping onto the floor.
/me cleans the water up quickly,
/me wipes each and every window. Leaving them chrystal clean.
/me sighs, picks up the bucket, and brings it back to the CCA.
Me: "The task was successfully completed, master...."
CCA: "<:: Hold it, I have another task for you. I'll take the towel... and you can use this mop to clean the plaza sidewalks.
/me takes the bucket.
Me: "It will be done to your likeing, master...."
/me walks to the plaza sidewalks.
/it The sidewalks are covered in dirt, it looks like it may take a long time.
/me sighs, picks up the mop, and drowns the mop in the Bucket water.
/me takes the mop out, wiping it across the cold concrete of the sidewalks.
/me drowns the mop in the bucket again, bringing it out for another wipe.


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):He was one of the ones that fled to Xen when the Combine invaded. Later, he was sent as a foot soldier into Black mesa when the incident happened, believing this attack would benefit his people. Luckily, he avoided Gordon freeman's path, but he did once in a while get a glance of Orange and black going around a corner. When he realized the Nihilanth was dead, he fled the Facility, avoiding contact with Combine and humans alike for years. Several years later he was captured by the Combine after he made a mistake involving the citizens of City 14, and he was made a slave. He learned many computing skills in City 11 observing CCAs, and he gainted philosophy skills listening to other Vortigaunts communicate. He now currently works as a slave in City 18.




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Name: "Ank'tuk" Villetucauca
Age: 42
Skin tone colour: Bright Green.
Eye colour: Bright Red.
Scars/Marks: Scar on left shoulder, Scar on eyelid.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: Minor - Medium knowledge of philosophy, Great knowledge of technology from observing CCAs.


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?: The only problem with my establisher government was that I was framed for vandalism by a degenerate Vortigaunt. I was proven innocent, thanks to an error the criminal made.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?: In the future I plan to serve the combine, obeying all their commands and doing any work they need done.


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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  musketeer on Sat Jul 07, 2012 12:13 pm

Right, I finally got around to doing this.

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Annoying Rooster, Diablo, Zue, Russian Cosmonaut

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Evan Beck
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That Generous Guy
Ob02

All those who were denied, I'd duggest looking at apps that have been accepted and use ideas from that to improve your own. ie, more in depth backstory, more detailed RP examples. Don't be afraid to have more than 20 line of an RP example and 6 lines of backstory.

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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Sat Jul 07, 2012 12:28 pm

Woo! Thanks Musketeer!
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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  Spade on Sat Jul 07, 2012 3:31 pm

Steam name:|Dд| Spade
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:23876595
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?:1 hour


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)

/Me Starts cleaning dirty ACR

/it Windows have a blood stain dripping down

/me Cleans blood off

CCA:Hurry up

Pau'Tek:Yessss Masster

CCA:Haha

/me Starts scrubbing faster

/it The ACR window dries

/it The CCA Pours soda on the window

CCA:Clean it up.Haha

/me Attempts to shock the 03

/roll Biotic "74"

/roll CCA "92"

/Radio Requesting back up "404"

Pau'Tek:Sorry Massster

CCA:/me Pulls out stunstick flicking safety off

Helix:03 Put it down,This creature cant control itself

Pau'Tek:Than you masster

CCA:/me Turns safety on

CCA:/me Holsters Stunstick

Helix:Get back to work

Pau'Tek:Thank you ssir

/me Starts scrubbing next side of the ACR

/me Gets towel wet

/it Dirt slide's off windows

/me Dry's window

/me Picks up bucket

/me Starts Cleaning the front

/me Scrub's and dry's engine

Pau'Tek:Massster im done cleaning the ACR

CCA:Good job,Get back to the nexus

Pau'Tek:Yess Masster

/me Walks to nexus









Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Pau'Tek grew up on the outside the Xen Slave Camp.He grew up in a family of 3 His mother and his brother Gar'Tek.as a child he was bored and couldn't understand anything.He didn't understand anything until,One day he was moved to earth.Then when he was found in 2017 the CCA found him thinking 'We could use more biotic's".They took him to to the nexus putting a tracking device on him.He woke up one day with strange clothing on.He had gotten up and went outside being told to scrub the windows.As he scrubbed the windows his towel dropped as a CCA ran up to him saying "Pick up the towel" As he picked up the towel he started scrubbing again.When an anti citizen ran by with a SMG,He got scared and accidentally shocked him.The CCA granted him for getting an Anti-Citizen off the list.When his masster told him to go back to the nexus he said "Woww Thisss is a great city".As he woke up the next day he was told to do the same objective.As he scrubbed the window his master told him to pick up the soda can when he did he put it in the trash can.After he was done working Pau'Tek Said 'I can start getting usse to thiss".The next day he woke up where he was found tied up with Anti-Citizens using him as a hostage,They of course didn't care if he died so they shot him in his leg when this happened he broke his ties loose shocking one of the Anti-Citizens.The CCA were able to shoot down the rest of the Anti-Citizen's throwing them in jail until amputation.Now Pau'Tek has gotten use to the Civilization and knew he could live with it.


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Name:Pau'Tek
Age:147
Skin tone colour:Green/Teal
Eye colour:Red
Scars/Marks:Left arm

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?:Pau'Tek is good with Medical and Powers such as electricity.Pau'Tek is a young Biotic with an an obey philosophy.And gets angry when frightend by a citizen or CCA (he doesn't control it he gets mad easily).


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:No my character is obedient because he fears someone who can injure him badly.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:Serve the combine and be loyal to the combine.Since he fears the Combine he will serve them good.So Pau'Tek can be one of my finest characters and it will be good for Role playing
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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  profile_#name on Fri Jul 13, 2012 8:18 pm

musketeer wrote:Right, I finally got around to doing this.

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Evan Beck
Spade
That Generous Guy
Ob02

All those who were denied, I'd duggest looking at apps that have been accepted and use ideas from that to improve your own. ie, more in depth backstory, more detailed RP examples. Don't be afraid to have more than 20 line of an RP example and 6 lines of backstory.


Spade stop the spamming re-posts, Please! Evil or Very Mad

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Magnums enslaved biotic application

Post  Magnum21 on Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:39 pm

Steam name:/\/\agnum
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:38823154
Age:14,15 in 2 weeks Very Happy
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 years


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)
/me Is looking around for something to clean
/it A citizen approaches saying "Do you want to be free"
/me replies "The combine will be angry with thiiiis one
/it The citizen insists "Come with me,now"
/me trys to run.xar'zel has rolled 51
/it /genericnamedcitizen rolls 50
/me runs away
/me is approached by a helix,ordering in a demanding voice "Come with me"
/me Says "This one will do as he is told,masssster
/me follows th ehelix to the medbay
/it The helix orders "Clean this blood up,now"
/me is thrown a wet rag
/me responds "This one will clean,Maaaaster"
/me begins cleaning


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Xar'zel was a adopted vortigaunt,adoped by a elder,and taught over the years how to heal and use the vortessence.Xar'zel eventually leared to heal larger wounds,but then,the combine invaded.The elder fought back,trying to protect a small family of other vortigaunts,but was shot down.
Xar'zel was scared,running,he was shot in the back with a pulse rifle,causing him to fall over while running and become inslaved.Xar'zel served the combine to the best of his abilities,out of fear and depression.
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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)
Name:Xar'zel
Age:31
Skin tone colour:Dark greene,almost black
Eye colour:Red-orange
Scars/Marks:Large scars all the way down both arms,back has a large burn and a wound from a pulse rifle round.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: knowledge in philosophy,Trained under a elder for healing


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:None,too scared to resist.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:
This one plans to serve the combine,not out of willingness,but of fear.
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G-Mans Biotic App

Post  [SoTA]G-Man on Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:51 pm

Steam name:G-Man
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:31437618
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 years IRL


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)
/me Walks up to a dirty ACP
/me begins scrubbing left over dirt on the ACP
/it A helix DvL walks over
CCA-HELIX.DvL.19908:"Biotic, you missed the blood marks in the front."
Jek'Raul:"Yessss Sorry Massster."
** CCA-HELIX.DvL.19908 nods
/me begins scrubbing the blood marks
/it the DvL Leaves
/me takes a deep breath
/it the Commander walks over
CCA-CmD.88067:"Biotic,I have gotten complaints of you not working hard enough."
Jek'Raul:"That isss impossible Massster, Jek'Raul has been working very hard."
CCA-CmD.88067:"I sure hope so Biotic."
/it gunfire is heard from the distance
CCA-CmD.88067:"Biotic, Get down!"
/me crouches behind ACP
/it Two citizens with mp5k's appear
Citizen 1:"Hold it right there."
CCA-CmD.88067:"Put your guns down, or you'll regret it!"
Citizen 2:"Why should we gramps?"
/me chucks water can at citizen 2's head
/it the citizen stumbles back in anger
Citizen 2 yells "You son of a bitch!"
/me shakes in fear
/it the Commander pulls out his magnum shooting randomly
/it the citizens Flee the area as the Commander fires
/me begins scrubbing ACP again
/it the Commander chases after the citizens
/me hears gunfire from a distance
/me begins scrubbing faster and faster
/it A bloody Helix crawls over
CCA-HELIX.03.65686:"B-biotic, G-get help."
/me nods and says "I will try masster."
/me runs off
/me sees the citizens firing at the units
/it the citizens yell "Come get us you cowards!"
/me sprints toward the nexus hardpoint to get help
/it a Helix DvL runs into the biotic
Jek'Raul:"Massster, A unit needsss asssistance."
CCA-HELIX.DvL.19908:"10-20, Biotic?"
Jek'Raul:"Over by stained Vehicle."
/it the biotic and the DvL runs over
/me stubles upon Dead 03
CCA-HELIX.DvL.19908:"Shit!"
/me begins to tear up
Jek'Raul:"I am sssorry Massster."
CCA-HELIX.DvL.19908:"It is not your fault Biotic."
/me begins crying



Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
Jek'Raul was born in Xen in the early 1700's, he was always loved by his brotheren, He was treated well as a biotic of Xen, He always played on the good side and always cleaned up messes, from blood to dirt, He was clean he did get rewarded alot but he wasnt really a normal biotic, he was always known as a "Clean Freak" or something, He didnt like the fact but didnt care what other biotics think, He was a straight forward biotic, He loved all biotics and even people, Alot of biotics loved him so he met a female biotic named Ang'Ful, She was always like him she always cleaned messes with him, so they became in love with each other, That made like easier because his parents were always travelling the city of Xen(The government that he was in.) so later in 2015 he got captured by the combine(Elite police units) They took him to several cities but the first one was city45 before its destruction, He was held by the combine, He always was told to clean up small messes, but later he began cleaning bigger and helping unit novas build stuff like manhacks and etc..., but that really didnt last because they transported him to city18 in the year of 2016 he was always helping Helix's fix other units up but the Sectorial Commander didnt like it so he started making Jek'Raul Clean up messes on unit armour and Vehicles, He's been doing that for 1 year now, now he just wants to stay a good biotic and work for the combine as long as he can.


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Name: Jek'Raul
Age:160
Skin tone colour:Light Green(Pale)
Eye colour:Reddish Orange
Scars/Marks:Brown marks on both hands from shocks,Scar on left eye for being beaten

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: He is good at cleaning up messes and such


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:No Jek'raul has not

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?: To be a hard working biotic and be a good slave to the CCA
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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  Spade on Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:33 am

Steam name:★Ѕpade★
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:23876595
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?:1 Year and about 2 month's


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)

CCA-HELIX:Vort you must clean my suit
Pau'tek:Yes sir
/me Takes his suit
/me Sprays it with bleach
/me Starts to scrub
CCA-HELIX:I dont have all day vort
Pau'Tek:Sorry masster
CCA-HELIX:Well hurry up
/me Scrubs faster
/it The armband starts to fade away
CCA-HELIX:Its fading stop!
Pau'Tek:Sorry masster
/it The CP shocks him
Pau'Tek:Im sorry pleass stop
CCA-CmD:Unit stop that! This creature cant control that.
CCA-HELIX:Yes sir
/it The CmD leaves the room
Pau'Tek:Done with the suit
CCA-HELIX:Well then start scrubbing the mask
/me Sprays the mask with bleach and scrubs it
/it A Anti-Citizen breaks through the door
Jerry Blake:Dont use the radio and give me your items helix
/me Gets up
Jerry Blake:Sit down vort
/me Stares into the citizens soul and creates a Purple ball attemtping shocking him back hitting the wall
/roll Pau'Tek:86
/roll Jerry Blake:52
/it The helix radios for backup saying "To the helix bay Anti-Citizen
/it CCA Swarm in arresting the man by tieing him
CCA:Come with us scumbag
CCA-HELIX:Thanks for doing that
Pau'Tek:No promblem masster
/me Continues to scrub his Mask
/me Finishes and sprays bleach on his boots
/me Starts to scrub his boots in a rectangular motion
CCA-HELIX:You can stop cleaning
Pau'Tek:Are you sure?
CCA-HELIX:Possitive
/me Sets the Bleach and rag on the table
/me Gets up
/it The CCA Puts on his armour
/me Walks out of the room






Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Pau'Tek grew up on the outside the Xen Slave Camp.He grew up in a family of 3 His mother and his brother Gar'Tek.as a child he was bored and couldn't understand anything.He didn't understand anything until,One day he was moved to earth.Then when he was found in 2017 the CCA found him thinking 'We could use more biotic's".They took him to to the nexus putting a tracking device on him.He woke up one day with strange clothing on.He had gotten up and went outside being told to scrub the windows.As he scrub the windows his towel dropped as a CCA ran up to him saying "Pick up the towel" As he picked up the towel he started scrubbing again.When an anti citizen ran by with a smg,He got scared and accidentally shocked him.The CCA granted him for getting an Anti-Citizen off the list.When his masster told him to go back to the nexus he said "Woww Thisss is a great city".As he woke up the next day he was told to do the same objective.As he scrubbed the window his master told him to pick up the soda can when he did he put it in the trash can.After he was done working Pau'Tek Said 'I can start getting usse to thiss".


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Name:Pau'Tek
Age:147
Skin tone colour:Green/Teal
Eye colour:Red
Scars/Marks:Left arm and Right Eye

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?:Pau'Tek is good with Medical and Powers such as electricity.Pau'Tek is a young Biotic with an an obey philosophy.And gets scared when frightend by a citizen or CCA (he doesn't control it he gets mad easily).


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:No my character is obedient because he fears someone who can injure him badly such as OTA,CCA.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:Serve the combine and be loyal to the combine.Since he fears the Combine he will serve them good.So Pau'Tek can be one of my finest characters and it will be good for Role playing.
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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Fri Aug 10, 2012 2:31 am

Magnum: DENIED

The amount of /me and /its were to little. Please re-apply in 2 days.

G-Man: APPROVED

Alot of detail was put into the /me and /its. I was impressed. Good jerb. Not to mention some of the corny diolauge. It made me chuckle a bit. Gramps. Heh.

★ЅƤΔDΣ★: DENIED

Ide like to see allitle more detail in the /me and /it's from you. I can see the story you were attempting to develope, but over all I just didnt feel like I was being immerced into it. The other things were great. But the /me's and /it's could use some work.

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Re: Enslaved Biotic Application

Post  Spade on Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:21 pm

Steam name:★Ѕpade★
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:23876595
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?:1 Year and about 2 month's


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)



/me walks toward the dirty window and examines it
/it You hear boots hitting the ground behind you
/me immediately begins scrubbing the window
/it You feel a stunstick press against your back
CCA-CORE-02 says: Biotic, scrub faster.
/me begins shaking and drops the towel
/it you hear the stunstick charge up
/me scrambles for the towel as quickly as possible
CCA-CORE-02 says: Hurry up!
Pau'Tek says: Peassse massster, have mercy!
/it The stunstick flips off
/me Picks up the towel, still shaking and begins to scrub the window as fast as he can
/it You hear more combine walking down the hall
/me Begins shaking even more heavily
/it you feel a hand touching your shoulder
GHOST-DvL says: You have no reason to fear me, biotic.
/me begins to ease up
**CCA-CORE-03 salutes the DvL
**CCA-CORE-04 salutes as well
**GHOST-DvL nods.
/me finishes scrubbing
**CCA-CORE-02 dumps a bucket of dust all over the newly cleaned window
CCA-CORE-02 says: Haha.
/it You feel a sudden burst of anger and frustration
/me reaches his arms out to the sides
/it Pau'Tek's eyes turn a deeper red
/it Green lightning bursts from his fingertips, shoking the 02 and everyone else around him
/it The GHOST-DvL and the 04 are knocked unconcious, but the 02 gets up.
**CCA-CORE-02 flicks on his stunstick
Pau'Tek says: Pleassse masster, I did not mean to ssshock you.Im sssory
CCA-CORE-02 says: Am I supposed to beleive the one who just nearly killed me?
Pau'Tek says: Masster, pleasse forgive thisss one.
/me begins to shake heavily
**CCA-CORE-02 swings his stunstick, knocking Ren'Kal unconcious
/it 30 Minutes later
/it You begin to regain conciousness
Pau'Tek says: Where is thiss one?
Someone says: Haha.
/me relizes he is in the torture room.
/me begins to struggle, but cannot break free as he is tied tightly to the chair
/it The door swings open and CCA-CORE-02 walks in.
CCA-CORE-02 says: So, you like to hurt people? Well guess what, I like to hurt biotics.
/me begins to shake and stops struggling
Pau'Tek says: Do to thisss one what you will.
CCA-CORE-02 says: Please, resist, it will make this so much more fun!
**CCA-CORE-02 pulls out a long, sharp combat knife
/me begins shaking, as if all the fear in the world has been implemented
/it The door swings back open and the GHOST-DvL walks in
GHOST-DvL: Unit, stand down
**CCA-CORE-02 sheathes his combat knife
GHOST-DvL says: Unit, why are you torturing him?
CCA-CORE-02 says: He shocked us all, don't you remember?
GHOST-DvL says: This biotic has a history of this, he has no control over it. I beleive he should not be punished.
CCA-CORE-02 says: Yes sir
GHOST-DvL says: Now, leave me to this biotic unit.
**CCA-CORE-02 nods and leaves the room
/it The door closes behind him
**GHOST-DvL begins to untie the biotic
/me hesitates, but manages to say "Thank you, massster."
**GHOST-DvL nods



Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Pau'Tek grew up on the outside the Xen Slave Camp.He grew up in a family of 3 His mother and his brother Gar'Tek.as a child he was bored and couldn't understand anything.He didn't understand anything until,One day he was moved to earth.Then when he was found in 2017 the CCA found him thinking 'We could use more biotic's".They took him to to the nexus putting a tracking device on him.He woke up one day with strange clothing on.He had gotten up and went outside being told to scrub the windows.As he scrub the windows his towel dropped as a CCA ran up to him saying "Pick up the towel" As he picked up the towel he started scrubbing again.When an anti citizen ran by with a smg,He got scared and accidentally shocked him.The CCA granted him for getting an Anti-Citizen off the list.When his masster told him to go back to the nexus he said "Woww Thisss is a great city".As he woke up the next day he was told to do the same objective.As he scrubbed the window his master told him to pick up the soda can when he did he put it in the trash can.After he was done working Pau'Tek Said 'I can start getting usse to thiss".


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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)
Name:Pau'Tek
Age:147
Skin tone colour:Green/Teal
Eye colour:Red
Scars/Marks:Left arm and Right Eye

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?:Pau'Tek is good with Medical and Powers such as electricity.Pau'Tek is a young Biotic with an an obey philosophy.And gets scared when frightend by a OTA or CCA (he doesn't control it he gets mad easily).


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:No my character is obedient because he fears someone who can injure him badly such as OTA,CCA,Or because he fears someone he thinks is higher then him.

What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:Serve the combine and be loyal to the combine.Since he fears the Combine he will serve them good.So Pau'Tek can be one of my finest characters and it will be good for Role playing.
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