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Kaile Gale Vaile's Application for MPF

Post  Febidoman on Sun Jun 10, 2012 6:43 pm

Steam name:Koty
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:18485879
Age:23
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 months ½ on different servers.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):
/me Patrols around corner.
/me Looks around the area checking for disturbance.
/it The air is silent and a few citizens walk past.
/me Spots a particular citizen.
/it He walks toward me.
Citizen Says: Hey you combine Bitch.
I say: What did you say?
Citizen Says: You heard me.
/me Flicks on stunstick, Firmly holding the grip, turning it to high voltage.
I say: Get on the wall.
Citizen Says: Why?
I say: Get... On the wall.
Citizen Says: Fine you combine Bitch
I Say: Apply
Citizen Says: I'm not telling you crap.
I Say: I said, Apply!
Citizen Says: I did absolutely nothing.. I will kill you asshole!!
I say: Hmm. Unfit for the civil community
/me Attempts to knock out Citizen with Stunstick.
/I roll 51 out of 100.
/Citizen Rolls 49 out of 100.
/me Knocks out citizen and Ties him up.
/me Walks to nexus and tosses citizen in cell for 2 cycles of detainment.
/me locks Combine lock and walks off to patrol more.

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should
reflect your skills): Kaile Gale Vaile was a businessman, very successful. He created video game systems and
games. His family was very rich, but not spoiled. But even when the combine took over, he was still not worried and very very nice, he helped the CCA as much as he could. He always actually wanted to join them. He did not worry about the invasion.
He looked at the gas masked men, and thought "I am going to apply..."
He went and filled out a paper with many questions, slipped it in and waited for
Approval or Denial

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Name:Kaile Gale Vaile
CID:63344
Age:26
Country of origin: USA
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: He is very good with knowledge of technology, He is increasingly strong, And very athletic.







PLEASE DO NOT READ TILL 6/14/2012


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Re: CCA Application

Post  Tenacious Dee on Sun Jun 10, 2012 9:53 pm

^^ Thats 5 lines not 6 LUL
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CCA application For borderlands - Hank Jenson Klark

Post  borderlands on Mon Jun 11, 2012 2:10 pm


Steam name:borderlands
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:30383087
Age:80
How long have you been roleplaying?: 1 year


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase) /me looks around, tapping his stunstick against the wall.
/me spots a citizen who sits on a bench.
/me walks up to him.
Me: "<:: Citizen, move along!"
Citizen: "W-why?"
/me flicks his stunstick on, "<:: Move it!"
Citizen: "O-okay, I'm going, I'm going!
/it The citizen stands up and walks away.
/me walks away aswell, as he looks back he sees the citizen running.
/me quickly turns, chasing the Citizen.
/it The citizen spotted the MPF chasing him, and runs even faster, but he soon gets slower.
/me comes closet to the citizen, "<:: Don't move!"
/it The Citizen stops fully, he is breathing heavily.
Me: "<:: Face the wall!"
/it The citizen doesn't move.
/me readys his stunstick.
/me attempts to swing it at the Citizen.
I rolled: 51
Citizen rolled: 20
/me hits the citizen's back once, he falls on the street, his head seems to be bleeding.
/radio Requesting a, err, HELIX Unit to my 10-20, head injury.
/me flicks his stunstick off, waiting for the HELIX Unit.
/me quickly salutes the higher ranking HELIX Unit.
/it He nods, "<:: Continue 10-50, I got this."
Me: "<:: Copy."
/radio Unit is moving to Plaza, 10-50, medium Civil activity, status green.
/me swings his stunstick around a few times, keeping the lookout for more anti-citizens.


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): i was in denmark when the war began i was an store keeper i myself wasn't awere of the war so when it came to us we wasn't preparet so we lost but i was afraid when we lost so i took to city 18 and some strange people came to me and said ¨Come with us¨ so i did and they took me to the slums i tried to go in there when a stunstick hit me in the back head and when i woke up i was in a strange macine and i found out that it was an brian washer macine and now i am slaved to work for the Universial union


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Name:Hank Jenson Klark
CID:44177
Age:34
Country of origin:denmark
Hair colour:black
Eye colour:brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:i know 1 or 2 things about technology and i know how to use an medic pack


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:no


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:no
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Noobstrike on Mon Jun 11, 2012 4:45 pm

Borderlands:
DENIED
Your /me and /it examples are Great! But you like lost all effort in your backstory. It is very confusing the way it is written and lacks punctuation and grammar. If you improve your backstory's quality, you should be excepted. Apply in two days.
Koty:
DENIED
Your RP example are OK, although your backstory needs improvement. It should show personality and where he originates from. You said he is "very very nice" How so? Was he helpful to the CCA? Was he cooperative? Did he perhaps report people hiding from them? Improve your backstory, and apply again in two days.
Shaddup Rudolf:
DENIED
Your RP example first off lack a bit of detail. What was the citizen doing to seem suspcious? How did you locate his room? Was there a nametag on the door? Also, the time segments of detainment are "Cycles" Not "Shifts". He would be in there much longer than 3 for admitted murder and dealing contraband. Your examples hint at metagame and powergame in your actions. Your backstory has little effort in it, and you streched it into 5 lines, You didn't show personality, where you came from, or any of this, and it lacks grammar/spelling etc.
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Remember, Im not skippin apps, just doing them in segments

Post  Noobstrike on Mon Jun 11, 2012 5:23 pm

Epicstar45:
DENIED
Your /me's and /it's need to tell a story, not just a bunch of random stuff thrown togathers in a steaming pile of SHIT.."/it Sec (cherry) Flys out of nexus with a female CP." I'm not even going to SAY...why thats wrong... Your backstory says that the "sec got drunk and blew up the nexus"? WTF!? Someone that irresponsible would NEVER be the SeC. I suggest you play the server a little longer and learn about HL2RP.
Diablo:
ACCEPTED
Did I scare you with the red letters? Mwahahah! Your /me's and /it's are very detailed, and you show alot of effort in them. Your backstory is great, and tells us quite a bit about you! Very nice work! Ask any SA to whitelist you.
Gman:
You got permabanned yesterday...so...uh...like...yeah...Denied?
dkmin:
100% Fucking ACCEPTED!
Dude. I love you. Legit. Your /me's and /it's are good, and your backstory is AMAZING. You put TONS of effort into this, I can tell! Ask any SA to whitelist you, and I hope you put this much effort into being a CCA.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Wishbone on Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:22 pm

Steam name:Wishbone
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:28582166
Age:16
How long have you been roleplaying?:Quite awhile, Not sure how long, used to play roleplay in World of Warcraft, I was decently good at it, thats what most people said to me when we went out in huge groups.



20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):

/me becomes startled at the sound of screaming outside.
/me quickly puts on his gun belt and boots and rushes towards the door.
/it the door slides open with a grinding sound.
/me steps out and looks down the street to see a crowd of rioters.
/me runs down the street and finds the closest citizen and pulls him out of the crowd and asks him to "Apply".
/it the citizen says "John Richardson 13375".
/me whips out his datapad and enters the CID.
/it the citizen looks at him with a nervous look.
/me looks up at the citizen and says "Wall!".
/it the citizen looks around for the nearest wall and walks over to it.
/me walks with the citizen finally reaching the wall and says "Do you want a mal-compliance citation?".
/me ties the citizen.
/it looks back at the officer with a saddened look.
/me quickly slaps on the zip-tie and motions to the citizen to move.
/it the citizen walks in a fast pace towards the nexus.
/me whips out his stunstick and taps on the shoulder of the citizen and says "Slow down".
/it the citizen lessens the pace and sighs.
/me smiles and keeps on walking.
/it The citizen reaches the door just as I do.
/me walks up to the door and unlocks it and without a word pushes the citizen in.



Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Jackson Paine use to live in a place called "New Orleans". He had a pretty rough childhood, as he was deep in poverty. He had family like his father but he was shot and killed in a drive-by. His mom left when he was 12 years old. He had no brothers or sisters. He had no idea if he had any grandparents or cousins or aunts or uncles. He was now alone for 5 years until the combine came in and found Jackson in a broke-down house up north in the state. He was first taken to City 13 at age 17 he lived there for 2 years and then when the alarms sounded of the rebellion he was shipped off to City 18, where he now lives with a couple of choices, either starve and find ways out of the city or join the combine, the first two were rough as he tried it for 2 years but now he has grown tired of it, and now hes willing to try the last option as a last resort. He hopes that the combine will take him in despite the fact that hes colored.


Name:Jackson Paine
CID:50072
Age:23
Country of origin:United States
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Moderate in the medical field, somewhat of a novice in technology. Can wield a sidearm well.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
Negative.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
Negative.


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I would say no for Wishbone

Post  That Generous Fish. on Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:12 am

Wishbone wrote: City 13 at age 17 WOOT How can you be this old After ther 7 Hour war
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Re: CCA Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Tue Jun 12, 2012 11:37 am

dkmin wrote:
Wishbone wrote: City 13 at age 17 WOOT How can you be this old After ther 7 Hour war

People in WW II faked their age to stay in the camps. You never know what someone might do to stay alive.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Noobstrike on Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:11 pm

He could have been made an elslaved child worker for a year.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Tenacious Dee on Tue Jun 12, 2012 9:09 pm

And mine is forgotten once again.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Tue Jun 12, 2012 9:12 pm

I haven't forgotten about you....
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Noobstrike on Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:08 am

TENACIOUS. I DID NOT FORGET YOU. Your whitelist was removed for making lolrouges apparently, so Im just not doing your app. Get me loggs from cherry/snake that you MAY have your cca whitelist back, and I will look over it.

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Kaile Gale Vaile's Application for MPF -FIX-

Post  Febidoman on Wed Jun 13, 2012 3:56 pm

Steam name:Koty
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:18485879
Age:23
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 months ½ on different servers.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):
/me Patrols around corner.
/me Looks around the area checking for disturbance.
/it The air is silent and a few citizens walk past.
/me Spots a particular citizen.
/it He walks toward me.
Citizen Says: Hey you combine Bitch.
I say: What did you say?
Citizen Says: You heard me.
/me Flicks on stunstick, Firmly holding the grip, turning it to high voltage.
I say: Get on the wall.
Citizen Says: Why?
I say: Get... On the wall.
Citizen Says: Fine you combine Bitch
I Say: Apply
Citizen Says: I'm not telling you crap.
I Say: I said, Apply!
Citizen Says: I did absolutely nothing.. I will kill you asshole!!
I say: Hmm. Unfit for the civil community
/me Attempts to knock out Citizen with Stunstick.
/I roll 51 out of 100.
/Citizen Rolls 49 out of 100.
/me Knocks out citizen and Ties him up.
/me Walks to nexus and tosses citizen in cell for 2 cycles of detainment.
/me locks Combine lock and walks off to patrol more.

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should
reflect your skills): Kaile Gale Vaile was a businessman, very successful. He created video game systems and
games. His family was very rich, but not spoiled. But even when the combine took over, he was still not worried and very very nice, he helped the CCA as much as he could. He always actually wanted to join them. He did not worry about the invasion.
He looked at the gas masked men, and thought "I am going to apply..."
He went and filled out a paper with many questions, slipped it in and waited for
Approval or Denial

---IC Information---
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Name:Kaile Gale Vaile
CID:63344
Age:26
Country of origin: USA
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: He is very good with knowledge of technology, He is increasingly strong, And very athletic.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Thu Jun 14, 2012 12:29 am

We need more CCA's. Its really starting to become apparent to me that not many CCA's get online during the day.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  musketeer on Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:28 am

But what is better? A bunch of 05s that can't do their job. Or a smaller bunch of 05s that can RP correctly?

We're not going to accept applications because we need more people, it will go really, hideously, terrifically and stupendously BAD.

I would suggest that people spend more time on their app, look at other people's app and look AT THEIR WRITING STYLE. ie, do not copy.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Thu Jun 14, 2012 12:24 pm

Good point.
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Bailey Shires civil protection application

Post  milfhunter on Thu Jun 14, 2012 12:43 pm

---OOC Information---
_______________________________________________________


Steam name: milfhunter
Steam ID: 39786493
Age: 14
How long have you been roleplaying?: 2 ½ years

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me runs up stairs
/me knocks on apartment door
/me yells open up
/me knocks on door again
/me open up
/me yells this is you second warning
/me knocks on door
/me yells open up
/me yells final warning
/me knocks on door
/me places charge
/me takes out pistol
/me searches apartment
/me goes to next apartment with anti-citizens
/me places charge on door
/me shoots at anti-citizen
/me rolls 34/100
/anti-citizen 46/100
/me misses

/anti-citizen runs for gun
/me shoots in back
/me rolls 68/100
/anti-citizen rolls 24/100
/anti-citizen gets hit in back and falls to ground
/me ties anti-citizen
/me searches apartment for contraband
/me amputates anti-citizen


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Bailey was born and raised in West Limerick, he was always playing cops and robbers in the playground where he spent most of his days, or playing basketball outside of his school. One day he got into a fight with a few guys who were up to no good, they'd been making trouble in the neighbourhood, Bailey had always aspired to become some sort of officer of the law so he confronted the boys in an attempt to make them stop, but it just led to conflict and Baileys mother ended up sending him to live with his Aunt and Uncle in Englend.

Baileys aunt and uncle were wealthy, so he received an amazing education and left school with straight a's, as did his cousins, Carlton, Hillary and Ashley. Scott's uncle was an attorney, so naturally he was able to get into Law School pretty easily. Around the same time that Bailey had graduated the BMI had just happened, over the coming months there were reports of strange 'Portal Storms' all over the world. Shortly after the Seven Hour War began, strange creatures had infested the earth and they were killing anything and anyone in their path.

Bailey tried to hide, to find his family, but it was too late. By the time the creatures had stopped, over 80% of the human race had been slaughtered and instead of creatures, there were huge, intimidating men, if you can call them that. They spoke with a metallic shrill and if you didn't obey them you'd get a thwack across the head with a some sort of huge Taser, or worse. Most of the earth had been destroyed, places like America were just piles of rubble and all that was left standing were cities approved by the 'Universal Union'.

In the coming months Bailey was transferred to a UU approved city in eastern europe, City 18. Upon arrival Bailey was assigned a room in the 45ths, he was a generally quiet person and had very little friends, upon those friends was a girl named Charlotte Blaze, she was a loyalist and informed Bailey about the combine and how they're here to help instead of destroy, Bailey was intrigued, he monitored the plaza from his apartment window and came to the decision that she was right.

From then on Bailey was a loyalist, performing good deeds for the Union and assisting the people in any way he could, but Bailey ambition to become a member of the law still burned inside of him, but Bailey had no idea how to become a member of the union.

---IC Information---
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Name: Bailey Shire
CID:
Age: 21
Country of origin: Ireland
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Yes I was in the armed forces as riot control.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Negative


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: Negative
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CCA App

Post  Zergling373 on Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:33 pm

Steam name: Zergling373
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:24682134
Age: 18
How long have you been roleplaying?: Since I can remember.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me Stands against a wall, near the fire.
/it A few citizens approach the fire, and begin whispering.
/me Moves slightly closer, without the citizens noticing, so that I can hear.
/it Citizen whispers, "I have a hand grenade in my pocket."
/me Approaches the citizens, and says "Isolate, except for you."
/me points at the citizen that said he had a grenade.
/it The citizens scatter, except for the one.
/me says "Approach the wall, and face it. Do not move after that."
/it The citizen approaches the wall, not knowing that I heard him.
/me attempts to tie the citizens hands.
/it The citizen does not resist.
/me searches the citizen and finds the grenade. I confiscate it.
/me says "I'm going to let you off with a warning this time, because you were cooperative."
/me hits the citizen three times, then releases him.
/me says "Now get out of here."


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

He was forced into City 18, after a bunch of rebels broke into his house and killed his family looking for supplies. He served in the war for two years, and fully understands how to use weapons. He's somewhat muscular, and has a heart full of revenge for the rebels. He fully understands the combine ways, and wants to help them in any way possible. He's quiet for the most part, but loves the ability of having power over people.

---IC Information---
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Name: Xavier "Zero" Clementine
CID: #97705
Age: 25
Country of origin: Canada
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Hazel

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:

Combat trained, specializes in assault rifles.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:

Nooosir.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:

Nope.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Magnum21 on Fri Jun 15, 2012 11:24 am

Steam name:/sss/ /\/\agnum
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:38823154
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:one and a half years


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase) /Me is dispatched to district 6
/it a citizen saw another citizen jump the fence
/me Asks for discription
/it Citizen did not get a good look at the suspect
/me Radio's in about the suspect
/it Dispatcher orders me to pursue
/me Radio's in "Roger"
/Me pulls out a small key and unlocks the gate's door
/Me walks in making sure to lock the fence behind me
/Me sees the suspect
/it Suspect Freezes
/Me says "What are you doing in district 6
/it responds with "To get away from you stupid CPs"
/Me pulls out stunstick and flips it on,Making sparks fly from the end
/It the citizen pulls out a revolver and points it at me
/Me attempts to knock the revolver out of his hands
/me rolls 87
/it rolls 59
/Me knocks the revolver out of the citizen's hands and knocks him out with a stunstick
/Me Radio's in "Suspect detained"

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Jack mortimer was always a quiet and strange boy,enjoying the simpler things in life.He was always bullied and never belived by anyone,But his brother,Who was his only close relative.They were always close,Even growing up,at 16 Jack got his first job as a shop clerk for a gunstore,Always having fun Looking at all the guns around him daily,until the seven hour war......Jack was not a fighter,but his brother was,so jack happily supplied ammo and guns to the rebels until the combine attacked....The small band of rebels was killed,Brutally.Watching his brother get completly massacred by a combine elite,He started to develop a hate for the combine,But he couldnt resist getting revenge on the people who bullied him,never belived him,calling him a freak.....So he enlisted in the combine








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Name:Jack mortimer
CID:#20237
Age:19
Country of origin:Canada
Hair colour:Shaved hair,but naturally black
Eye colour:Ice blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Worked at a gunshop for several years,trainind to use most guns,was best with a SPAS12 shotgun.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
none

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:None

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Re: CCA Application

Post  DeadCherry on Fri Jun 15, 2012 12:30 pm

The following are too short to be passable and the middle one stole the name of Zero so already thats a disaprove by me.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  DIABLO258 on Fri Jun 15, 2012 1:53 pm

There are still two others on the previous page, use your review skills to the max!
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Noobstrike on Fri Jun 15, 2012 8:21 pm

Dood. Cherry. Dis guy stole your name. Time to divide by zero.
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Loginator's CCA Application

Post  lco890 on Fri Jun 15, 2012 11:06 pm

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Steam name: Loginator
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:22894088
Age: 18
How long have you been roleplaying?: About a year


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/it You notice that you are running low on ammo.
Me: Crap I'm guarding the district six checkpoint there's no way i can get more ammo.
/me Picks up his radio.
Me: Radios in: If there's anyone in the Nexus can you please bring me two pistol ammo boxes. I'm at the district six checkpoint.
/it A unit approaches you and appears to be holding a box full of ammo.
/it The unit extends his arms waiting for you to take the ammo.
/me Takes the ammo gladly.
Me: Thank you very much. Now the only thing getting through here will be bodies!
/me Chuckles
/it The unit walks away laughing.
/it You are guarding the checkpoint when suddenly you hear the request device crackly to life and a random citizen's voice is saying: "Help, someone help! A man just broke into my apartment and is holding a gun to my head! It's apartment three, Hurry!"
/me spots a lower ranking unit nearby and yells "Hey come guard this checkpoint i have to take care of something."
/it The unit takes your position as you run off towards the apartments.
/it You hear gunshots as you run up the stairs.
/it As you run into the apartment you see a bloody lump of what used to be a citizen on the ground.
/me Looks over to the other unit standing in the room.
Me: Wow, you know you could have just beaten him and took him in for interrogation.
Unit: Ya well... my finger kind of slipped...
/it Both the units laugh and the citizen that made the call laughs nervously along with them.
Me: Well citizen you're safe for another day.
/me thinks about how he has to go back and guard the boring district six checkpoint.
Me: You know what, that 05 i got guarding the checkpoint isn't that bad. How bout we go intimidate some citizens.
/it As you walk out of the apartments you notice someone standing on the edge of the bridge.
Me: Hey you get down from there!
Citizen: No! I can't take this anymore! You guys have made my life hell, i'd rather die then live another day in this god awful place!
/me thinks to himself how bad it would be if he had a suicide on his hands.
Me: (whispering to the other unit) Go up there and knock him out with you're stun stick, i'll stay down here to catch him.
/it As the man on the bridge has his eyes closed for a brief second the other unit runs back into the apartment.
Me: Now it may be true that we haven't been the nicest of people, but if you come down i promise you that we will be very understand from here on out.
Citizen: NO! I don't believe anything you say! You can't talk me out of this.
/me thinks to himself, huh well then i hope i can catch this guy.
/it you see the other unit sneak up behind the person, raise and stun stick and ZAP, the sound of the electric end making contact with the man.
/it As the man starts to fall you get ready for the catch.
Me: Worst case scenario: I don't catch him and i get fired and possibly killed. Best case scenario... I get promoted!
/me catches the citizen.
/it There is a loud thud as the unit catches the citizen and you can hear some bones break.
/me yells up to the other unit.
Me: Come down here and help me get this guy into a cell!
/me talking to himself "We've got a long day ahead of us with this one."
/me laughs as he and the other unit carry the unconscious broken man towards the black walls of the Nexus.
THE END! (sorry it was so long, kinda got caught up with the story, heh)

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Well, I grew up in Kansas City with my folks. They were great, I really loved spending time with them. We had a pretty good house, nice car, nice things. We weren't rich at all though. I got A's and B's in school, that made my parents so proud. I loved it when they smiled. The best thing is is that they always stayed together, even though they had some fights here and there they stuck with it. Things were great until i moved away to go to college. Granted it was in the state so i could visit my folks relatively easy but still, i'd never been away from them like that before. You could tell it was having an effect on them as well. We made it through though. Throughout college I took up martial arts to fill in the void of not being able to see my parents. I wasn't the best at it but i could defend myself pretty well if i absolutely had to. A few years later i graduated college with a degree in business. You see, all my life I've wanted to be a big CEO, I've always looked up to them actually. I was on my way to making my dream a reality. Unfortunately I had to start out working a crummy desk job in an office complex. Apparently we were working for some company called Black Mesa. Stupid name if you ask me. I didn't complain though, I new that i could exceed the expectations people had of me and eventually climb that ladder to the top. Buuuuuuut it didn't really work out like that. A few months after i had been working there these... things, i'm not really sure what they are, they're human like but they aren't from earth. Anyways they invaded our planet and captured anyone they came across. Me as well as everyone that was working in the same building were shipped here to city 18. It was a horrible trip. We were all scrunched together in this strange looking truck. I'm not sure how far we traveled but when we got there these... people i guess you could call them had already sealed off the city, and in the center was a horrific black tower. I've learned to ignore it though so it's not a bit deal any more. Anyways, a few weeks later i got a letter from my parents, to this day I still don't know why the combine aloud me to receive it, they told me that they were living in City 14 and were safe. After that letter I was the happiest person alive. Now your probably thinking i'm crazy for wanting to join the ranks of these horrible people but you know what, I've seen what they do to the rebels and anti-citizens. So I've decided that i'm going to do whatever it takes to get on their good side. Until i get accepted into the Nexus as I've learned to call it, I will strive to become the best loyal citizen I can be. So that's basically my story up until this moment. I'm one of the lucky ones unfortunately.

---IC Information---
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Name: Jacob Logator
CID: 40022
Age: 22
Country of origin: United States
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:

I don't know much about medicine or technology but i'm willing to learn. But i'm pretty good at martial arts so I can defend myself in hand to hand combat.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:

No I have not.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:

No, actually the opposite. I strive to be the best citizen I can be.
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Krystal's CCA Application

Post  Zergling373 on Sat Jun 16, 2012 4:51 pm

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Steam name: Zergling373
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:24682134
Age: 18
How long have you been roleplaying?: As long as I can remember.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me walks up to a group of citizens.
/me says "Isolate."
/it The citizen looks at me, and says, "Krystal? Is that you?"
/me says "Second warning. Isolate now."
/it The citizen says, "I know that's you Krystal."
/me flicks on stunstick to high.
/me says "Final warning. Isolate now."
/it The citizens leave, except for the one.
/it The citizen says, "If that's really you Krystal, I know you wont do this."
/me approaches the citizen.
/me says "Alright. Wall. Now."
/it The citizen approaches the wall.
/me attempts to tie the citizen, citizen resists.
/roll (Me=56, Him=68)
/it The citizen begins to run.
/me chases after him, and corners him in a building.
/me says "Prepare to receive civil judgement."
/it The citizen screams, "How could you do this?"
/me hits the citizen four times with a stunstick.
/it The citizen falls to the ground, unconscious.
/me radios in, "Suspect apprehended. Bringing him in."
/me throws the citizen over her shoulder, and takes her back to the Nexus.


Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Krystal was split off from the only family she knew, Amber (cousin) when she was first brought into City 18. She doesn't know what happened to her, and assumed the combine killed her. She was rebellious at first, learning how to use pistols and how to react while in combat. But after being beaten and re-educated, and being 4 points away from amputation, she's rethinking her path she's choosing. She's slowly becoming more and more brainwashed by the Combine.

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Name: Krystal LePointe
CID: #54945
Age: 23
Country of origin: Canada
Hair colour: Brunette
Eye colour: Dark Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Used to be a combat medic, knowledge of using pistols. Been in combat before.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
Yes, I've gotten points for audio violation and running. But I've been re-educated and my record is now clean for doing good deeds.

I have a great idea for my character's Roleplay, and I think it would be an awesome idea if she became a CP, due to her already being known as someone who causes trouble.
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Re: CCA Application

Post  Tenacious Dee on Sat Jun 16, 2012 5:48 pm

Lco/Loginator's app was fucking eye candy.
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